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Zero at the Bone by MadLori
cathyinaz:
Any news from Lori? We miss you Lori and I hope all is well with you. 8)
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: cathyinaz on February 21, 2007, 08:16:23 pm ---Any news from Lori? We miss you Lori and I hope all is well with you. 8)
--- End quote ---
Oh I can't wait for this chapter, hopefully she will post this today so I can take in on the plane with me and read it there! 8)
mvansand76:
Well, for the people who don't know yet.... chapter 13 is up!
http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/76924.html
Bigheart:
**SPOILERS**
This was just great *happy sigh* I'm SO relieved and happy they are back together again and that D took this first step to be close to Jack again, that he was the one to make the first move :)
All at once, D felt the tension leave Jack’s shoulders. Jack turned quickly and pressed hard against D, a sob overlaid with a sigh escaping him. D sucked in a breath and shut his eyes, clutching Jack to his chest and holding him fast, Jack’s arms around his shoulders.
“I can’t believe you came for me,” Jack whispered against D’s neck.
“Hadta,” he said.
“Why?”
“Shhh,” D said. “Jus…” He hesitated. “Jus lemme hold ya fer a minute, okay?” he whispered. Maybe if he was quiet enough it wouldn’t really be him saying it. “Don’t ask me no questions. Jus lemme feel yer safe.”
Jack sighed and his arms tightened around D. “D?”
“Hmm?”
“I might want to hold you longer than a minute.”
“Hmm. I s’pose.”
Lovely :)
mvansand76:
Well, that was worth the wait! One hell of a chapter and I agree with you June, it was so good to read that D made the first step! I loved that part that you quoted, it was so sweeeeeeeet!
I am really looking forward to Jack finding out Ennis's real name. I really feel like they can't have SNIT until they have really opened up to each other and Jack knows his real name. It wouldn't feel right otherwise...
Also, I have to admit that I have no clue whatsoever about what is going on with D and X and...everything else.... I will have to reread it all once I it is finished...
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