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Zero at the Bone by MadLori
Brown Eyes:
I really like the complexity of the storyline in this one too. :)
mariez:
SPOILERS
This was an awesome chapter, the story keeps getting better and better. Yeah, I agree about the depth and complexity. It looks like everything is coming to a head and we'll be getting some answers soon.
But it also looks like they're headed for a separation - temporary, I hope - but it's going to be heart-wrenching nonetheless. It'll be hard to wait for the next chapter.
Marie
souxi:
Update.
http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/87879.html
ifyoucantfixit:
SPOILERS'
This was an awsomely angsty chapter. I love this story.
mariez:
SPOILERS
It must've been hard to write this chapter, because by the end I was drained just reading it.
“Thanks for my life.”
“Thanks for mine.”
Sob.
“I’ll find you. You hear me?” ........... “I will find you.” .....Could be years.”
“I’ll wait.”
Sob.
“You take care a my Jack.”
SOB!
Sigh. Yeah, it was awesome angsty - and awesomely hopeful, too. I'm holding tight to that little checklist of Jack's: Stupid things like you and me in a house with a dog and a vegetable garden, and Sunday mornings in bed with coffee and the paper.” But I know that won't happen overnight. Lots of scary stuff ahead, I'm sure.
Marie
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