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Zero at the Bone by MadLori
ifyoucantfixit:
--- Quote from: louisev on October 17, 2006, 08:11:36 am ---only because I read someone else discussing it. I'm not big on Emily Dickinson and didn't know this poem.
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i do like emily dickensen, a lot but im not familiar with this particular poem...very interesting lori...i am very interested in your new story as i have been all the rest.. thanks for the job you do..a loyal reader janice
MadLori:
Chapter 3
http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/64211.html
one_of_one:
Oh I absolutely love this story.
I love Jack's humour and the way he is irritating "D", but at the same time is getting under D's skin. In some ways Jack is such an innocent but in others he is quite clever, surprising D.
*SPOILERY BITS*
Couldn't help but smile when D is telling himself he just wants Jack to shut up and stop asking him questions, but at the same time really wants to open up and talk to Jack. He's so used to not talking to people, and for people to not even bother wanting to make the effort to converse with him. He's certainly met his match with Gobby!Jack. LOL
And the part in the motel room when D really wants to tell Jack his name, and wants Jack to keep talking so that D can see his "big blue eyes".
I liked the bit where Jack tricks D into revealing he was in the military...and D's subsequent thoughts as to whether it was jack who was clever or him that was slipping....bit of both maybe?
:) H
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: one_of_one on October 30, 2006, 10:13:55 am ---And the part in the motel room when D really wants to tell Jack his name, and wants Jack to keep talking so that D can see his "big blue eyes".
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Oh yes, that was such a nice end to the chapter... I liked how in chapter 2 Jack accidentally guessed D's real name, that was so cute...
MadLori:
New chapter!
http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/65217.html
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