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Zero at the Bone by MadLori
mariez:
--- Quote from: atz75 on October 23, 2007, 09:51:37 am ---Hooray! Something to look forward to for when I get home from work!
:D
--- End quote ---
Me, too. Damn work. :) But I don't want to rush through.....
Marie
mariez:
SPOILERS
This may have been my favorite chapter yet. Chock full of all kinds of great stuff - hot and tender and funny and heart-wrenching. I really like the pacing of D's emotional progression. And then we have the really intriguing plot lines.
“Or maybe,” D said, thinking out loud, “Petros sold his services ta somebody else who was willin ta pay more’n the brothers do.”
“You mean…maybe he wasn’t going to take me to the brothers?”
“No way ta know now. But if he was workin fer my blackmailers instead a the brothers…that is troublin news.”
OMG - this is what's been scaring me (on top of everything else) that there's no clear line of demarcation between both "sets" of bad guys - they may have different motivations, but they're equally dangerous and you're never quite sure who's who or what's what.....really great stuff.
Marie
Brown Eyes:
SPOILERS...
I agree that this was a fantastic chapter. And, it's really interesting to see how much Jack and D are opening up to one another in terms of communication... Jack didn't hesitate to finally openly express his feelings about D... and D did not try to shield Jack from the extent of his knowledge and activities regarding protecting Jack and hunting down the different sets of bad guys. It will be interesting to see when the final step in communication happens and D finally expresses his feelings (verbally) and gives up his name too.
ifyoucantfixit:
I have been reading so much of Lori's writing for so long, until I feel I am running out of ways to express
my love for her stories..My list of adjetives are starting to sound trite.
This story is wonderful and the characters are so well defined..The connection they hav is great and the excitment is
teriffic too...Cant wait to get the next chapter,,but as you said, I hate to see it come to an end....glad she is planning
a sequel also....go go Lori....
Brown Eyes:
**Update today**
:D :D :D
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