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Zero at the Bone by MadLori
mariez:
Chapter 30 is up!
http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/96222.html
SPOILERS
A master class in excellent writing. Considering the premise of this story, it would have been so easy for Lori to fall into the trap of artificial angst or over-the-top melodrama, but she maintains a tight control over her characters and her storyline. She not only understands her characters, she respects them as well. That is something that is very important to me as a reader. Hard to choose, but maybe my favorite part:
...D whipped out a camera and snapped photos. “You’re such a tourist,” Jack laughed.
“Fuckin moose, Jack! Look at that sucker! He’s huge!” He pointed, grinning like a child, looking back at Jack with his face full of open wonder.
Jack smiled, watching Ennis, a lump rising in his throat.
Yep - his Ennis. :)
Marie
Brown Eyes:
Madlori!!
mariez:
--- Quote from: atz75 on May 23, 2008, 01:22:01 pm ---
Madlori!!
--- End quote ---
I'll add my birthday wishes for Lori to yours, Amanda! I don't think she's been here for a few months, but I'm guessing/hoping she's busy writing! :)
Marie
mvansand76:
Prettige verjaardag Lori!!!!
:-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
Brown Eyes:
Well, yeehaw! For those of you waiting on this... the epilogue was posted tonight! 8)
Plus there's info about a forthcoming sequel! 8)
http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/96294.html
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