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Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
Beatrice:
For the two or three people over here that are reading - here's a little preview of tomorrow's chapter...Psst! It's VERY adult!
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The kiss was a soft lingering one, Ennis taking his own sweet time on those blow job swollen lips, holding Jack to the wall - sweat pinning sticky - his steady strokes keeping him a guttural cry away from orgasm.
“Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you…”
Ennis used Jack’s sighs to breathe, tongue forcing the words of his song deep.
“Happy birthday, my love…”
For both mouths sucking pleasure, a finger smeared with Jack’s excitement left c*ck to join the party above, salty clear slick mingling with the sweet aftertaste of icing.
“Now, I’m going to f*** you.”
Hands full of Smithsonian caliber ass, Jack smiled. “And many more!”
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Until tomorrow!
B
louisev:
now you know there are more people reading than THAT - just in the chat room!
We are waiting with bated breath! And icing!
Beatrice:
OK - four.
But, that quartet is enjoying the ride, and that's all that matters.
B
Mikaela:
Now it's five. :)
I only recently discovered this fic and read all the chapters through in the course of the holidays.
Outstanding quality and original writing style, Hotness with a HUGE capital H plus passion and urgency galore, lots and lots of great wry humour both in the dialogue and in the narratives (That whole Thanksgiving scene! Priceless!), consistent and clear characterization, intrieguing plot with a darkish crime mystery to cap it all. Absolutely loved every word of it and every scene bar one, and am very eagerly waiting for more.
mariez:
Wanna go for six? ;D Although I am sure there are many, many, many more than that who are enjoying the ride! Found your story recently, B, and it is awesome! Sexy, fast, intriguing, funny, unique . . . . just everything! How I wish I had more time to spend reading these fantastic fics by you talented authors!
Thanks - Marie
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