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Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
Beatrice:
Thank you!
And that is the miracle of Jack, I believe, to come from such horrible beginnings to reach a place in his life where he is independent, he is successful, his is optomistic, he is able to love. Jack is indeed masculine just as he should be in all BBM fanfic, (sadly both you and I know that isn't always the case), but he doesn't need to punch things or pick fights or bully to show that. And neither does Ennis.
He is also SO DAMN lucky to have that sexy NYPD sergeant, ain't he?
Thanks again!
B
Beatrice:
Here's a little teaser for Chapter 30!
*****
Not unless blowing through a jumbo box of condoms in less than a week is trouble.
“Wha…huh…oh…god.”
Moments before – not a cloud in the bottomless sapphire blue, just the sun watching, only God looking on and approving, knees dirt grinding, meadow green staining my palms, the mountain’s sighs cooling our naked bodies, he's behind me, moving… swaying... rolling, tight hands on my hips, taking…thrusting…pounding, me, my ass pushing back, demanding…riding…bucking, both of us howling nature’s song, Ennis… Jack… love…forever… - and now this –
“You are…you are…you…fuck.”
Thighs made the perfect frame for Ennis’ wink, his ‘Good Morning, Jack!’ lip-stretched smile orally replacing that annoying and impersonal alarm clock.
“Ennis, you…shouldn’t…too…”
Too close, too near, his ticket to Paradise – upgraded to First Class when Ennis sucked up hard – "Oh...god!" - already punched before waking up, and now the train was preparing to leave the station, but that couldn’t happen, not with him doing…not this way, he couldn’t – “I can’t… not ...no.”
Spit dribbled down the line between his balls, swirled around by thumb while tongue lapped through the slit, teeth nibbling at the head, Ennis refusing to relinquish control, refusing to heed the warning.
“I’m not…I’m about…Ennis, no.”
Jack shoved away, pulling his orgasm on hold barely body from Ennis’ mouth - “I can’t…can’t…won’t…” - heels digging in, fingers scratching out from under, sheets ripping from their moorings, head, shoulders tipping over the edge in his mad scramble to save his love from danger – “Ennis…not in…not in…your mouth!”
“Shhhh, Jack, I know,” tender kisses and licks up quivering legs - calming, soothing, pacifying. “I know, baby, shhhhh.” Ennis, the early riser in all respects, staved off Jack’s complete bed tumble by grabbing knees, bringing them up and over his shoulders – a few wet kisses there, too - holding him secure, keeping him safe, positioning him right. “I know. Just wanted your taste in my mouth while we did…” A completely protected, lubricated and erect cock pushed in. “…this.”
“ENNIS!”
********
See you tomorrow!
B
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: Beatrice on January 16, 2007, 11:42:16 am ---Here's a little teaser for Chapter 30!
See you tomorrow!
B
--- End quote ---
:o :o :o
Tomorrow better come soon!!
Beatrice:
Teaser for tomorrow's chapter!
***********
Preoccupied with signing the forms, mind on the burning hole in his pocket, where it would lead him next, Ennis answered the phone without thinking, without looking at the incoming number, without realizing he had just hit speaker.
“Del Mar.”
“I want you inside me now.”
The phone dropped, maniacal laughter skittering across the counter.
“Oh…shit, I…damn…come back…shit!”
Saved from a plunge off the other side, the cell was returned to its beet red owner compliments of the desk clerk and his smirk.
“Uh...I’ve got…to take…” A vague wave to anyplace but where he was standing right now.
“Yes, I heard.”
Ennis brought the cell, the slow burn, and the clerk's wink over into the far corner to hide. "Jack, don't ever fucking do that again!"
"Not into phone sex, then?"
"I'm working here!"
"All work and no play makes Jack a very horny boy."
"No work and all play makes Ennis a very unemployed boy."
"Just file Form 69."
"Form..." Jack plus inside me plus horny plus sixty-nine equals...equals...who needs fucking math anyway? "What?"
"Incident report for non-lethal discharge of an officer's weapon." Jack's voice finessed the innuendo, words doing what fingers and lips could not. "But, I've got to warn you."
"About what?"
Sex whispered hot against Ennis' ear. "It must be filled out in triplicate."
**********
Tomorrow!
B
louisev:
ew now just yer TEASERS make me green with envy. Damn!
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