Author Topic: NC-17 RATED FUN: LET'S GET REAL HERE--How Many of Us Have Been SWOONING Nonstop?  (Read 684940 times)

Offline Sheyne

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So Brandon, you can recommend the Deer Hunter??

Never seen it myself..  Just the uhh.. "Jarhead" version.
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Leaving so soon David? 'Night babe  :-*

Sheyne - WOW. I could fall in love with you, I swear  :-* I read it, give me a minute to digest it.

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No worries, hon.

For those who don't know what Mandy's talking about... I just PM'd her the first installment of our OWN little fanfic..  ;D
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Yeah I recommend it definetly. I, for some reason, am not a big fan of older movies. For some reason I just can't get into them, but this was really good...had no trouble getting into it.

Well I want to read it!!
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Sheyne - K, I read it again. *blushes* I love it. You can share it here, it's not too graphic or anything.

Offline Sheyne

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Well, I really dig old movies, myself - but I know what you're saying - some of them are not very accessible to younger audiences. With this in mind, I can totally recommend the following: The Dirty Dozen, Citizen Kane, Casablanca (my ALL time favourite movie), The African Queen among others...
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Okay, I got the green light from Mandy to share our fanfic, chapter 1:

Sheyne stepped into the elevator and hit the B button for basement.  The doors lingered open for a moment and she stared into the carpeted hotel hallway. The silence was deafening.  She let her forehead fall forward and rest against the cool metal interior of the elevator.  The cold stung momentarily and she inhaled sharply.  As she did, she smelt Mandy. A blend of her shampoo, the scent of her skin and her taste. Sheyne licked her lips and melted again into the kiss…

She was standing in front of the door, fist poised inches from the wood about to knock, heart hammering in her chest.  Am I really going to do this? Sheyne asked herself, I met this girl on the internet.. she could be anybody.. she could even be a he..

She shook her head sharply. No, I know Mandy. I know her. Or I wouldn’t be here.  Reassured, she knocked twice, sharply.  With barely a beat the door opened.

“I heard the elevator,” came the voice immediately, “I hoped it was you. I been waiting right here in case it was.”

Mandy stood framed by the doorway, her dark hair spiraling down the sides of her face, cascading over her shoulders, sharp green eyes taking in the girl before her.

“You’re gorgeous,” Sheyne choked without being able to stop herself. And then laughed, “I’m sorry, that sounded stupid.”

Mandy took half a step forward and reached out with her arm. Her fingers felt warm on Sheyne’s forearm.

“Didn’t sound stupid at all,” she murmured with a smile. “You coming in?”

A jolt raced through Sheyne’s body. “Yeah.  Sure.”

Mandy pulled gently on Sheyne’s arm, leading her inside. The door closed behind them and Sheyne felt her bag being lifted off her shoulder.

“What are you..” 

“You don’t need that anymore.” Mandy smiled with fire in her eyes. “Don’t need this neither.” With that, she grabbed two fistfuls of Sheyne’s long coat and wrenched it off her shoulders and down to her elbows but no further. Sheyne’s mouth was dry but she licked her lips quickly as Mandy pulled her closer and their eyes closed.

Their lips met, softly at first. Just a sensation, a warmth; moist skin. Mandy’s fists tightened around the coat with an urgency and their kissing slowly grew more intense. Their mouths were wet and pressed firmly together, tongues beginning to explore each other.

With a sudden movement, Sheyne jerked free of Mandy’s grasp. Their eyes flew open and locked together, chests heaving, breathless. Without blinking, Sheyne wrestled her way out of the coat and let it fall to the floor.  In one quick movement she was back on Mandy, their lips stealing quick kiss after kiss as they grabbed at their clothes.

Mandy’s trembling fingers started working on her buttons. One first, then the second, the third proved too awkward so she began working her shirt off over her head. It caught around her chin and she began tugging more frantically.

She felt a pair of hot hands on her midriff and a soothing “sshh” sound from close to her ear.  Sheyne enclosed her hands over Mandy’s and released the shirt from her grasp and gently eased the shirt over her shoulders and head. Sheyne ran her hands slowly down the length of Mandy’s outstretched arms. She heard Mandy’s breath catch in her throat as her fingers found the bra. She started at the shoulder straps and slid slowly downward, letting her palms cup the softness before her fingers squeezed gently.

“Oh my god,” she whispered.

Mandy moved forward quickly, grabbing a handful of Sheyne’s hair and pulling her forward, roughly, pressing her open mouth firmly on Sheyne’s lips.

Sheyne felt herself falling and she landed on the bed, which she hadn’t even realized was right behind her.  Mandy lowered herself on Sheyne, kissing feverishly, hands wandering all over everything she could touch.  Sheyne’s arms wound tightly around Mandy’s body, squeezing hard, released, slid downward and grabbed her ass, pulling it tightly against her.

To be continued....  :o
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Woah..I'm not generally into lesbian porn or anything, but that was HOT!!!   :o

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NOW we're talkin'!!! :o :o :o