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White Picket Fences and Apple Trees
Penthesilea:
Thanks Fabienne. Off to read...
mariez:
Thanks, Fabienne!
SPOILERISH
This chapter is a great example of why I'm so glad to have this story back. Bobby is my hero!
Marie
belbbmfan:
Update!! :) :)
http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/1763662.html#cutid1
SPOILERS
I liked the talk between Ennis and Bobby. Ennis really managed to comfort Bobby. I can just imagine Jack almost bursting out of his skin trying to take the phone from Ennis. But I really liked the fact that Ennis dealt with this.
And some very painful things said between Lureen and Bobby. I can understand Bobby wanting to hear her say something that will make it all right. But like Lureen said 'what's done is done'. Bobby had to grow up fast but I think he's starting to realise that he came out ok. It's just the 'let be, let be' that can be hard to accept.
The atmosphere in Wyoming and Texas couldn't be more different.
I loved Ennis's embarressement at the fact that he couldn't get to Jack quick enough. And the fact that Junior noticed and couldn't help but smile too!
This is a great story. :) :)
*off do start my christmas shopping*
Penthesilea:
Thanks for telling us about the update Fabienne :-*
Off to read :D
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on December 22, 2007, 05:30:14 am ---
SPOILERS
I liked the talk between Ennis and Bobby. Ennis really managed to comfort Bobby. I can just imagine Jack almost bursting out of his skin trying to take the phone from Ennis. But I really liked the fact that Ennis dealt with this.
And some very painful things said between Lureen and Bobby. I can understand Bobby wanting to hear her say something that will make it all right. But like Lureen said 'what's done is done'. Bobby had to grow up fast but I think he's starting to realise that he came out ok. It's just the 'let be, let be' that can be hard to accept.
The atmosphere in Wyoming and Texas couldn't be more different.
I loved Ennis's embarressement at the fact that he couldn't get to Jack quick enough. And the fact that Junior noticed and couldn't help but smile too!
This is a great story. :) :)
*off do start my christmas shopping*
--- End quote ---
Yep, what you said! :) The fact that Ennis didn't hand the phone over to Jack speaks volumes, doesn't it? Bobby has two wonderful dads. And I had to keep reminding myself of that because I wanted to reach in and give him a hug while he and Lureen had it out. But, you're right - we can't change the past but we can learn from it. I just wish it wasn't always the children that take the brunt of all the curve balls that life throws at the adults.
This is a great story and I'm so glad she decided to continue.
Marie
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