Brokeback Mountain: Our Community's Common Bond > Brokeback Mountain Fan Fiction & Poetry
White Picket Fences and Apple Trees
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on May 27, 2008, 01:38:39 am ---But the silver lining is all the 'dad', 'daddy' and 'brother' that was said! That was wonderful.
--- End quote ---
It was wonderful. :) And I think another silver lining will be that the townsfolk will pull together and support them.
And I just thought of something. Troy had to tell Ennis that it wasn't the "regular" hospital, it was the Ten Mile Creek one. How will Jack know to go to the right hospital? I think he hung up before Kurt could tell him. I know he'll get there eventually, but the last thing he needs is a detour!
Marie
mariez:
Chapter 20 is up!
http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/2205904.html?#cutid1
Marie
rlh03:
Well, MaineWriter, once again you bring a wonderful story to us. The inner wrokings of the Twist/del Mar house have been great to read about, the kids growing up to recognize 2 dads, the growth and love each has for the others and,even with the problems of life and their need to protect each other again and again, the solidarity they have formed. And the ongoing inadequacy and self-esteem issue that Jack and Ennis have, which keeps creeping back to haunt us (and them) even as they time and again profess their love and need for each other. I really like the direction you have chosen, knowing it is going to have to come to a close soon, but I will keep coming back to read it more. I hope this is the last we hear of the tire-iron which has loomed over them for such a long time. Maybe even Lureen can become a 'nice' and 'accepting' and 'loving' person, but I won't hold my breath on that one. I ROFLMAO about the 'armpit sandwich' bit, that was truly inventive. I'm really looking forward to the way you wrap this story up, giving peace to all the characters (hopefully) and to us. Great Work!!
mariez:
Hi rlh! It's a great story isn't it? FYI, MaineWriter started the thread on this story, but the story is actually written by midget_size. She's also written some other wonderful things that you can find on her LJ. :)
For those who haven't read it yet, here's the link to Chapter 21. According to midget_size, there will be one more chapter after this and then an epilogue. It will be hard to say good-bye to all these rich and true-to-life characters.
http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/2307018.html#cutid1
Marie
rlh03:
I am indeed sorry for my mistake, particularly for thinking they were one and the same, not individuals. I will certainly write midget-size about the story. Thank you so much for correcting me.
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