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littleguitar:
--- Quote ---When I read Mandy’s “That Little Bit of Hope,” I felt she was striving for a professional tone so I sent her a PM . I gave her feedback about an element in her story I felt didn’t ring true. Mandy sent me a PM saying she appreciated my feedback which I felt was sincere.
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This is exactly what I mean, and I'm really glad you felt I was sincere. And I always felt bad about it because I never really succeeded in fixing the problem because I was too deep into the story... but I loved that feedback and plan on using it in revision.
one_of_one:
--- Quote from: littleguitar on January 06, 2007, 07:03:05 pm ---LOL You and me both :)
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Okay - from now on I'll mention the good and the not so good, since we seem to be on the same page with this. :)
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Helen :)
coffeecat33:
--- Quote from: one_of_one on January 06, 2007, 07:07:02 pm ---I made a huge (in my mind) error in Going Home regarding crofts and their sale. When I was writing I made a mental note to check it out but forgot, only remembering again later on. But it's the kind of thing that bugs me because I feel that I should be writing around the facts and not just writing things that fit the the story. Nobody mentioned but who knows if someone noticed and it distracted them or put them off.
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This made me LOL Helen because I have NO CLUE about crofts and their sale so it didn't bother me.
littleguitar:
--- Quote from: coffeecat33 on January 06, 2007, 07:18:31 pm ---This made me LOL Helen because I have NO CLUE about crofts and their sale so it didn't bother me.
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LOL I just had to go look up "crofts" in my on line dictionary ::) :D
littleguitar:
--- Quote from: one_of_one on January 06, 2007, 07:17:15 pm ---Okay - from now on I'll mention the good and the not so good, since we seem to be on the same page with this. :)
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Helen :)
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Sounds good to me ;) :D
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