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Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: beauba on January 22, 2007, 05:25:13 am ---Hi haunted.
I started reading your stories two days ago , and I love it ! I've almost finished Pine Creek.
It's good to read about the missing moments and how their relation grew .
And you even managed to put Annie in the story , that's so good .
Thanks for your beautiful stories , and I hope to read many more of them .
Nancy
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Hi Nancy,
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying them. And that's A LOT of reading in two days. lol I'm very flattered that they grabbed ya. ;)
Fitting 'Annie' into the story was something I had planned from the beginning. I dropped hints in Part 3 of "MMM" but then didn't make it all clear until Part 1 of PC. It was great fun to write. And I'm not done with Annie yet. She's going to make another appearance about eight years down the road for them...(about 8 months down the road for me and my writing. lol ) I can plan my stories out well in advance. My mind is crazy that way. ;)
Thanks again, Nancy.
I really enjoy and appreciate the feedback and discussion. :)
cag (My initials. ;) I'm feeling less 'haunted' these days...more peaceful. ) :)
ifyoucantfixit:
--- Quote from: haunted_by_bbm on January 20, 2007, 06:39:43 pm ---Thank you, sweetie. ;)
I was going for a little heat. ;)
C :)
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WELL well, when we last communicated, i had no idea you were even a writer.
i just read the first chapter of your moments story...i found it very compelling, real, and
a wonderful read..it drew you in from the start...being inside of both of the guys heads
was a very interesting way to get very involved in the moment...ennis' regrets, and
longings...his regrets from past decisions, and jack just needing to have the contact..
his hopes realized in so many ways...the sad thought that runs through my own mind,
knowing the future and how it all plays out...but love the way you tell, the time when
it was all so full of hope,,, again welcome to bettermost,,,so glad to see
you here.. janice
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: ifyoucantfixit on January 23, 2007, 03:47:14 am --- WELL well, when we last communicated, i had no idea you were even a writer.
i just read the first chapter of your moments story...i found it very compelling, real, and
a wonderful read..it drew you in from the start...being inside of both of the guys heads
was a very interesting way to get very involved in the moment...ennis' regrets, and
longings...his regrets from past decisions, and jack just needing to have the contact..
his hopes realized in so many ways...the sad thought that runs through my own mind,
knowing the future and how it all plays out...but love the way you tell, the time when
it was all so full of hope,,, again welcome to bettermost,,,so glad to see
you here.. janice
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Janice,
Thank you so much, sweetie,
Glad you enjoyed it.
It is so much fun to get inside our boys heads.
It seems only fair to me that they let me in their heads...after all,
they've been under my skin for damn near a year already. ;) hehehe
I really love it here.
C :)
mariez:
Saw the recommendation - and loved the title "Missing Motel Moments" - immediately! I've read the first three chapters - and they're fantastic! I agree with what Janice said about being drawn in - and getting inside Jack's and Ennis's minds. Very, very well done!
And oh, yeah - you were going for a little heat? Well, you definitely succeeded - and then some! :laugh:
Glad you're here and thanks for the stories!
Marie
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 23, 2007, 08:55:48 am ---Saw the recommendation - and loved the title "Missing Motel Moments" - immediately! I've read the first three chapters - and they're fantastic! I agree with what Janice said about being drawn in - and getting inside Jack's and Ennis's minds. Very, very well done!
And oh, yeah - you were going for a little heat? Well, you definitely succeeded - and then some! :laugh:
Glad you're here and thanks for the stories!
Marie
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Marie,
So glad you liked the title...I thought it was pretty catchy. lol ;)
I'm really glad you're enjoying my stories.
I'm having tremendous fun writing them. :D
The final part of "Pine Creek" will be posted on Thursday.
C :)
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