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Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 23, 2007, 06:21:01 pm ---Yes, Twister was my invention....big black stallion with blue eyes.
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I thought so!!! :)
I'm going to edit my entry and add an Author's note
at the end with a shout out to you. ;)
I knew I'd read the "blue eyes" in another fic. :)
Thanks. :)
C*
haunted_by_bbm:
NEW CHAPTER POSTING
“Warmest Week of the Year” – Part 4 (Sequel to “Pine Creek”)
This story is another one of my canon ‘add-ins.’
“Warmest Week of the year” picks up after “Pine Creek,” in May 1968.
There isn’t a reference to 1968 in the book or the film.
So, this story is entirely pulled out of my crazy mind. ;)
http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/5301.html#cutid1
Feedback more than welcome and appreciated!
Thank you!
C*
'haunted'
mariez:
--- Quote from: haunted_by_bbm on March 02, 2007, 01:13:17 am ---NEW CHAPTER POSTING
“Warmest Week of the Year” – Part 4 (Sequel to “Pine Creek”)
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WOO HOO!!! I'm gonna try and wait until tomorrow so I have time to savor every word - don't know if I'll make it, though! :)
Thanks, C*
Marie
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 02, 2007, 04:27:49 pm ---WOO HOO!!! I'm gonna try and wait until tomorrow so I have time to savor every word - don't know if I'll make it, though! :)
Thanks, C*
Marie
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Hi Marie, :)
Thanks so much.
Look forward to hearing what you think. ;)
Love ya, sweetie.
You are the BEST cheerleader.
(Are you enjoying those pom poms?) :D
C* :)
P.S. - If it helps to know this...this is one of my shorter chapters. ;)
It's only 5,300 words. ;) lol
(Chapter 2 was almost 12,000 words -
so that gives you a basis for comparison. ) ;) lol C*
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mariez:
Hey, C*!
I''m back. Scarfed that chapter right up the first time - and then went back and savored every word - the only way to really do your words justice.
You mentioned once that humor was new to you as a writer - wow - I can't believe that. The dialogue flows so naturally . . . it's obvious that our boys haven't just gotten under your skin, they've taken residence in your brain as well! :) Ennis and his crazy, "dirty joke" fruit cocktail - is that just so Ennis, or what? :laugh: Ya know, I love this balance to their relationship - this give and take, the many levels. Ennis views himself as the protector - Jack allows him this; Jack is in many ways more worldly - but he knows and respects the intelligent, thinking man behind Ennis's humble demeanor.
I loved this:
. . .hefty log they were sharing, an ancient fallen limb, large and craggy, a permanent fixture of their preferred campground, having resided in that spot for as long as Ennis could remember.
How perfect - permanent, timeless, created by God. A physical representation of their love - and why all of this -
drove Ennis to a primal place, ancient and primordial, primitive and pure, . . .
the primal meeting the spiritual… . . .
filling the sky with a resonating joy so few ever come to know. . . .
Unable to speak, powerless to stop, Ennis gripped tighter, wanting Jack’s cry to become part of his thrashing soul, willing the piercing howl to be absorbed into his very limbs, as they soared together, clinging in concert, two desperately fervent bodies reaching a mutual overriding release.
- just had to happen exactly there. Damn, you're good.
I probably won't be able to resist going back and reading again. :) Thanks, as always.
Love ya back,
Marie
P.S. Re Ennis's ominous feelings - can't wait to see where that is leading . . . I won't even hazard a guess - not with a writer of your caliber! :)
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