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Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
Brown Eyes:
Thanks for the update Cristine!
haunted_by_bbm:
You're so welcome, Amanda!
Nice to 'see' you. :) :-*
Cristine :)
haunted_by_bbm:
NEW CHAPTER POSTING
“Warmest Week of the Year” – Part 7B (Sequel to “Pine Creek")
“The man tasted of loneliness and need, strength and fear, desire and denial. Ennis’ conflicting emotions were always so prevalent in his kiss, Jack tasting the pain and the agony right alongside the need and the joy. It was a palpable experience that brought Jack to his knees every single time they kissed, no matter if he was sitting or standing.”
http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/7700.html#cutid1
Comments more than welcome and appreciated.
Thank you.
Cristine :)
mariez:
--- Quote from: haunted_by_bbm on May 08, 2007, 05:16:38 am ---
NEW CHAPTER POSTING
. . . .
The man tasted of loneliness and need, strength and fear, desire and denial. Ennis conflicting emotions were always so prevalent in his kiss, Jack tasting the pain and the agony right alongside the need and the joy. It was a palpable experience that brought Jack to his knees every single time they kissed, no matter if he was sitting or standing. .....
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God, this paragraph alone is awesome. I'm so looking forward to this newest chapter . . . as always! (Once I saw your drabble, I was hoping this wouldn't be far behind! :) )
Thanks, Cristine
Marie
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: mariez on May 08, 2007, 07:30:27 am ---God, this paragraph alone is awesome. I'm so looking forward to this newest chapter . . . as always! (Once I saw your drabble, I was hoping this wouldn't be far behind! :) )
Thanks, Cristine
Marie
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Ah, thanks Marie. :D
Right now, I wish I didn't have to do anything else but sit and write about our boys all day. lol Their love is so strong in my soul right now. And the dialogue...well, you'll see in this chapter that Jack in particular has so much to say to me...just won't shut up. ;) hehehe
But all that other stuff that I have to do every day keeps gettin' in the way. ;) lol
Take care, sweetie.
Hope you enjoy the chapter.
Cristine :)
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