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Love is Blind by el_wing
cwby30:
Mornin', el.
Well, It was a difficult chapter to read, especially the last one-third. But, a very good read and it moves the story forward. Have to remember your earlier comment, about there being only two or three more of these before the guys can get started on figuring out their sweet life together.
Hope there's a monetary reward for the guys, would help them set up their life. And would serve LD right to have his money pay for it, or at least part of it.
Thanks again.
Brown Eyes:
The angst and suspense in this chapter are really palpable.
**Spoilers**
I wrote this in my comment to the story... but I'll just repeat that it was really hard to read about Jack and Ennis fighting so violently even though we know they were just pretending to fight in that public setting. Also, to see Ennis collapse when he thinks they've lost Jack is heartbreaking. This update ends with quite a cliff-hanger indeed!
:)
mariez:
--- Quote from: cwby30 on February 11, 2008, 12:35:41 pm ---......about there being only two or three more of these before the guys can get started on figuring out their sweet life together.
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Well, that's good to know, cwby....but I don't want to the story to end! LOL! I hope we get to stick around for some of that sweet life.
--- Quote from: atz75 on February 11, 2008, 01:20:29 pm ---The angst and suspense in this chapter are really palpable.
**Spoilers**
I wrote this in my comment to the story... but I'll just repeat that it was really hard to read about Jack and Ennis fighting so violently even though we know they were just pretending to fight in that public setting. Also, to see Ennis collapse when he thinks they've lost Jack is heartbreaking. This update ends with quite a cliff-hanger indeed!
:)
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Yeah, I agree, Amanda. I thnk part of the reason it was so hard to read is because I could feel some kernels of truth behind the "acting" - Ennis really was uncomfortable with being outed so publicly and somewhere deep inside Jack was remembering those years of hurt (and, truthfully, he may have even taken a bit of satisfaction in punching Linden - although he knows logically he has no reason to be jealous). And OMG, when Ennis was yelling "No, no, no" it was ripping my heart out. I wonder what's up with Jorge? Great chapter.
Marie
(P.S. Your new picture is great, Amanda - always makes me smile when I see you smiling! :) )
Brown Eyes:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 11, 2008, 03:01:01 pm ---
(P.S. Your new picture is great, Amanda - always makes me smile when I see you smiling! :) )
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Awww, that's really sweet Friend. :-* That pic was taken at Rocky Mtn. National Park last May during the BBQ weekend. So, I was having loads of fun.
mariez:
Chapter 34 is up!
http://elwings-things.livejournal.com/27084.html
Oh, man.......All I can say is that this is the kind of chapter that makes me really greedy and selfish - I want el to quit her job and ignore real life just so she can get the next chapter up right away! LOL!
Marie
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