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Lumière:
May I dabble in the drabbles abit more? ;)
Sad streams by the river
He'd decided to make the trip one last time.
He wasn't sure he could handle being up there alone ..
Especially at this time -
The memories cutting through him like a razor
The nightmares infecting the remnants of his sanity.
Yet ..
He'd decided to make one more trip..
He sat on a rock by the river, his head in his hands..
They'd camped here for years, at least once a year.
He recalled the days of their youth -
How they'd sat around by the fire on this very spot
How they'd overindulged on the whiskey
How he'd watch Jack bathing in the river,
His body glistening in the sun, breathtaking, beautiful..
How they'd made love till they were worn
Giddy and exhausted from their passion ..
He wiped the streams of tears leaking from his swollen eyes,
A sob escaped his throat, his shoulders trembled.
Darkness descended upon the mountain,
The sound of crickets chirping and
The soothing music of the flowing river filled the air.
He sat still on that rock by the river,
A single candle burning by his side
His head still in his hands, shivering from the cold ..
He reached into the old canvas bag beside his feet
And pulled out the stained blue denim shirt.
He held it to his lips, then he managed to speak..
"Lil' darlin, I'm sorry I couldn't bring ya up here like ya wanted..
What did ya go and do that for? Leaving me like this?
I know you were angry with me, I know I let you down..
If yer trying to punish me .. well, yer succeedin'..
You know yer all I got ..
What did ya go and do that for, Jack? Huh? "
His lips trembled, fresh streams flowed ..
~303 words
ifyoucantfixit:
Very emotional Lucise, you are giving me goosebumps with the
talent that you display, Janice
mariez:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 06, 2007, 07:23:12 pm ---Lazy L Farm
Quanah, TX
Jack was in the kitchen, pushing down the lever on the toaster, when Ennis came it. “What’re ya doin’?” he asked.
“Makin’ myself a late night snack of toast and peanut butter,” said Jack. He peered into the toaster, waiting for it to pop, and when it did, no toast came out.
......
--- End quote ---
Now, we know your Jack doesn't really need that toast for his peanut butter, Leslie! ;) Your guys always make me smile!
--- Quote from: Lucise on February 06, 2007, 08:11:49 pm ---May I dabble in the drabbles abit more? ;)
Sad streams by the river
~303 words
--- End quote ---
From giddy to heartbreaking ... I'm really feeling his anguish. Yes, please keep dabbling!
Thanks again, Marie
ifyoucantfixit:
" Thats the last of it Jack."
" Did you get my pot.."
" Your pot?..we smoked it"
" Not that pot."
" My pot pot!"
" What pot pot?"
" The pot i grow the pot in."
" Ya brung that with ya?"
" Yep"
" What in gods name for Jack fuckin Twist?"
" jus in case Lureen might find it."
" So ya grow yer own pot, in a pot?"
" Yeah ,,what about it."
" Heloise says you have to match the size of the plant to the
size ah the pot,,,! So i bought this big ole clay pot.. dang,
im hoping this dam pot gits as big as the pot i put it in".
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: ifyoucantfixit on February 06, 2007, 11:28:33 pm --- " Thats the last of it Jack."
" Did you get my pot.."
" Your pot?..we smoked it"
" Not that pot."
" My pot pot!"
" What pot pot?"
" The pot i grow the pot in."
" Ya brung that with ya?"
" Yep"
" What in gods name for Jack fuckin Twist?"
" jus in case Lureen might find it."
" So ya grow yer own pot, in a pot?"
" Yeah ,,what about it."
" Heloise says you have to match the size of the plant to the
size ah the pot,,,! So i bought this big ole clay pot.. dang,
im hoping this dam pot gits as big as the pot i put it in".
--- End quote ---
LOL I'm laughing so hard, I just sprayed water all over my keyboard. LOL
That is the funniest thing I've ever read in my life. LOL
Okay, I'm still laughing. Hard to laugh and type at the same time. ;) hehehe
C*
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