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Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 27, 2009, 02:28:10 pm ---Small Grains and Big Dreams
Jack sighed heavily while looking at Bobby's report card. The kid couldn't hardly read but Lureen just buried her head in the sand, refusing to see things as they really were. Bobby wasn't gonna just suddenly change.
He threw the report card onto the counter and went back to his newspaper, the ad for the small ranch catching his eye again, and he turned his thoughts to that long-held dream. But as he let his mind wander with sweet images, he paused to wonder about the difference between keeping your head in the sand or high up in the clouds.
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Gorgeous writing, Marie. Very thought provoking! :)
Monika:
--- Quote from: Littlewing on February 27, 2009, 03:05:38 pm ---Gorgeous writing, Marie. Very thought provoking! :)
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I second that. :-*
Mikaela:
I third it. :)
mariez:
Thanks, friends! :)
How about for today:
* fiancée
* tropical
* explosion
Marie
mariez:
Stuff and Nonsense
He cringed inwardly every time Alma said the words, which seemed to be at the drop of a hat to everyone she came across. Apparently, she was a fiancée and she told him that he was one, too, only with one less "e" whatever the hell that meant. He sure didn't have use for such damn fancy sounding nonsense.
And then the way she kept "practicing" her soon-to-be name on any scrap of paper within reach. "Alma del Mar," "Mrs. Alma del Mar," and even, "Mrs. Ennis del Mar."
"Don't look right," he kept thinking. "Don't look right at all."
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