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mariez:
--- Quote from: Gwyllion on April 29, 2009, 03:50:24 pm ---A Long Road
“It’s yer turn a drive,” Jack complained.
“This wuz your idea, Dumbass. I think you should drive the whole way,” said Ennis.
“The whole way? It’s more’n two thousand miles!”
“That’s if yer shitbox truck even makes it.”
“I’m hungry. Stoppin’ at McDonald’s, then yer turn a drive.”
“Ya know, Jack, they got mountains in New Hampshire, jus’ like in Wyoming.”
“That so?”
“They call ‘em the White Mountains.”
“Do ya think it’s warm enough?”
“I hear it wuz ninety degrees there jus’ yesterday.”
“That so?”
“You want me a drive?”
“Maybe we’ll get there after it passes the House.”
http://www.wmur.com/politics/19324169/detail.html
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Aww, I wish! Great dialogue :) Thanks, Gwyllion.
mariez:
A Bad Fit
As they walked into the house after his baseball practice, Bobby was complaining again about the team, the coach, even the uniforms. Only half listening, Jack murmured something about not being that bad and that he'd get used to it, but as he looked around at the house that had never felt like a home and at his wife as she concentrated on her paperwork, he felt like he'd been trying to fit into a uniform that was made for someone else and playing for the wrong team for years. And he knew he would never get used to it.
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100 Years
Monika:
--- Quote from: mariez on May 04, 2009, 04:03:19 pm ---A Bad Fit
As they walked into the house after his baseball practice, Bobby was complaining again about the team, the coach, even the uniforms. Only half listening, Jack murmured something about not being that bad and that he'd get used to it, but as he looked around at the house that had never felt like a home and at his wife as she concentrated on her paperwork, he felt like he'd been trying to fit into a uniform that was made for someone else and playing for the wrong team for years. And he knew he would never get used to it.
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100 Years
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Thanks, I love your drabbles.
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: mariez on May 04, 2009, 04:03:19 pm ---A Bad Fit
As they walked into the house after his baseball practice, Bobby was complaining again about the team, the coach, even the uniforms. Only half listening, Jack murmured something about not being that bad and that he'd get used to it, but as he looked around at the house that had never felt like a home and at his wife as she concentrated on her paperwork, he felt like he'd been trying to fit into a uniform that was made for someone else and playing for the wrong team for years. And he knew he would never get used to it.
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100 Years
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Another perfect drabble! Poor Jack! :'(
fernly:
--- Quote from: mariez on May 04, 2009, 04:03:19 pm ---A Bad Fit
As they walked into the house after his baseball practice, Bobby was complaining again about the team, the coach, even the uniforms. Only half listening, Jack murmured something about not being that bad and that he'd get used to it, but as he looked around at the house that had never felt like a home and at his wife as she concentrated on her paperwork, he felt like he'd been trying to fit into a uniform that was made for someone else and playing for the wrong team for years. And he knew he would never get used to it.
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100 Years
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Beautiful as always, Marie. Thank you!
100 Years? Must have felt like that to him, every day.
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