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mariez:
How about:
* world
* wide
* web
mariez:
Worlds Apart
Ennis was always aware that Jack had seen so much more of the world than he had, or ever would, and there was a restlessness about Jack that scared him. The life he imagined Jack living seemed so exciting that he held his breath when it was time for them to meet, never completely sure that Jack would show.
Because the only thing Ennis knew for certain, even if he couldn't admit it, was that when he reached for Jack in the darkness of the night and held him close, he was holding his whole wide world in his hands.
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100 Words
gwyllion:
Nice one mariez!
I wish Ennis realized how much Jack really was his world.
gwyllion:
Night Ride
Jack woke up cold and lonely, the full moon casting shadows on the ground outside the tent. A damp fog crept up the foothills from the peaceful sleeping world below. He silently saddled his horse without much thought and set off up the mountain. The trail was clearly visible in the bright moonlight; only an occasional spider’s web impeded his rocky trek to the highlands above. An hour later, maybe two, he arrived at his destination. He quietly opened one tent flap wide, entered and settled himself inside, curled up next to his sleeping lover, absorbing his warmth and companionship.
-100 words-
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: mariez on May 15, 2009, 11:04:53 am ---Worlds Apart
Ennis was always aware that Jack had seen so much more of the world than he had, or ever would, and there was a restlessness about Jack that scared him. The life he imagined Jack living seemed so exciting that he held his breath when it was time for them to meet, never completely sure that Jack would show.
Because the only thing Ennis knew for certain, even if he couldn't admit it, was that when he reached for Jack in the darkness of the night and held him close, he was holding his whole wide world in his hands.
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100 Words
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Beuatiful, Marie. I loved reading through this! :)
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