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mariez:
Oh, Leslie. Any mention of Hal really gets to me - but this was just . . . oh, my. :'(
Thanks.
Marie
ifyoucantfixit:
Jack was tired this morning, he didnt often feel so low and tired. He just slumped down,
and let his head rest on his forarms. Maybe ill just rest my eyes. Before he knew it he was
asleep..He could hear the sound of the clock ticking in the background, and it gave him a
drone to send him farther and farther into sleep.. He was laying close to the fire, and felt
warm and cozy. tick tick, tick. it was coming closer and closer and closer...Jack, Jack Twist.
This is no place to take a nap...
It was Mrs Hammermeir, and she slapped him on the shoulder with her magazine,,,and
he saw the beautiful pair of red spiked heels as he opened his eyes....So the Devil really
does wear Prada..
Scott6373:
That's funny Janice ;D
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: Penthesilea on February 02, 2007, 09:35:19 am ---"No fire" -
Aguirre said and now he freezes his ass off on the mountain.
Fire -
warm and cozy, with Ennis sitting across him, drinking, sharing his sad story
Fire -
dies down, brings Ennis to him
Fire -
of passion, Ennis's and his
Camp fires -
countless
Fire -
BBQ with Lureen, the fire not half as warm as on a cold mountain
Fire -
adding fuel to the fire of short leashes and coffepot travels
Fire -
in a crematory, finally consuming him whole
Word count 79
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Damn, that sent a shiver! Incredible imagery.
C*
haunted_by_bbm:
--- Quote from: Scott6373 on February 02, 2007, 11:08:16 am ---
He regarded Lureen’s shoe lying by his foot: Pointed toe, high heel pumps. How could she wear those he though. He let his toe catch the shoe. He slipped his man’s foot inside the tiny shoe. He turned his foot back and forth in admiration of the look he achieved.
“Jesus Christ…I’m really queer.”
186 words
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omg I'm laughing so hard. Nice one. ;)
C*
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