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Camden Yards by debutante9 (Kumari)
mvansand76:
CHAPTER 10!!!!!
http://debutante9.livejournal.com/17846.html
Mariiiiiiiiieeeeeee!!!!
;D :D
yb:
I know a lot of people are squeeing for this chapter. But, honestly, I am heartbroken, where is my 'Full Count'? Kumari hasn't updated it since Aug 2007, I'm afraid she's going to abandon it. :'(
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: yb on December 24, 2007, 04:26:39 am ---I know a lot of people are squeeing for this chapter. But, honestly, I am heartbroken, where is my 'Full Count'? Kumari hasn't updated it since Aug 2007, I'm afraid she's going to abandon it. :'(
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I'm sorry to hear that, I understand how you feel... if it had been the other way around I would've felt the same... *hug*
yb:
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snork Snater Snuit on December 24, 2007, 05:10:13 am ---I'm sorry to hear that, I understand how you feel... if it had been the other way around I would've felt the same... *hug*
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Thanks for your kind words. I do like Camden Yards very much, but it's Full Count that I love, love very much, that's why it's rather frustrating about the situation.
mvansand76:
SPOILERS
--- Quote ---“Your wife coming home?” Jack asked as quietly as he could under the rule of so much alcohol.
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How poignant is that, that he is now referring to Alma as the wife instead of with one of his nicknames or just her name?
--- Quote ---Jack got on his knees and turned around on the couch in circles like a dog before settling down with his head in Ennis’s lap
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Oh God, I could have never come up with that line, that's just precious! As I said in my comment on Kumari's lj: I nearly choked on my breakfast, the pictures in my head were so vivid. LOL.
Jack is trying so hard with Bobby, but then he gets drunk himself and ends up drunk on Ennis's doorstep. I was really hoping for Jack and Ennis to spend some time together in this chapter and my heart sank when I realised he was still drunk. I don't know, they are exploring, yes, but I really wished they had done some soul searching between the two of them.
I have a sneaking feeling this is not gonna end well. I don't know why, but I really think Ennis is deep in denial, I really think he thinks he will be able to keep this up without having to tear up his family. I read some replies on this story that said Jack and Ennis need to be together because they love each other, but I hardly think it's that simple, it's often that simple in fanfic, but not in this story. Am I making sense? I can think of a hundred ways how they will never have a life together, while in other stories I can.
'Nough rambling....
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