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Camden Yards by debutante9 (Kumari)
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on April 28, 2007, 12:15:25 pm ---Here's a link to Chapter 6....
http://debutante9.livejournal.com/12933.html#cutid1
Leslie
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Yeah, didn't think about that, I was dead on the floor, you see.... ;D
mariez:
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on April 28, 2007, 12:52:43 pm ---Yeah, didn't think about that, I was dead on the floor, you see.... ;D
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Yep, I'll bet there are a lot of "dead on the floor" readers of that chapter. Damn. That was so well-written - and it's not just what happens, it's also the process that's executed so well.
Marie
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: mariez on April 28, 2007, 04:48:44 pm ---Yep, I'll bet there are a lot of "dead on the floor" readers of that chapter. Damn. That was so well-written - and it's not just what happens, it's also the process that's executed so well.
Marie
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I so agree, Marie! I loved the steps they took toward each other and the little flirtations that came almost automatically because they are already so close. This is such a great story, I loved that she showed us some things about Lureen and Alma too, it gives an extra layer to the story. And the ending, I really thought I was gonna pass out!
mariez:
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on April 28, 2007, 04:57:08 pm ---I so agree, Marie! I loved the steps they took toward each other and the little flirtations that came almost automatically because they are already so close. This is such a great story, I loved that she showed us some things about Lureen and Alma too, it gives an extra layer to the story. And the ending, I really thought I was gonna pass out!
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"...the little flirtations that came almost automatically because they are already so close..." Yes, exactly, Mel! The fact that they have been best friends for so many years adds such a different dynamic to ....everything. The Lureen and Alma conversation was interesting and enlightening as to the different relationships they have with their husbands. Yeah, the ending was a heart pounder . . . loved that the first word of the chapter was "....Jack...." and the last word of the chapter was "...Ennis...." Guh.
Marie
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: mariez on April 28, 2007, 05:17:30 pm ---"...the little flirtations that came almost automatically because they are already so close..." Yes, exactly, Mel! The fact that they have been best friends for so many years adds such a different dynamic to ....everything. The Lureen and Alma conversation was interesting and enlightening as to the different relationships they have with their husbands. Yeah, the ending was a heart pounder . . . loved that the first word of the chapter was "....Jack...." and the last word of the chapter was "...Ennis...." Guh.
Marie
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I didn't even notice that bookend! :o Guh indeed! :P
I also loved how Jack said that about "Happen, please let happen again", I adored that because it is so true to life, everybody who has fallen in love with somebody can relate to that feeling.
God, this must be one of the best fanfiction chapters I have read in a LONG while....
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