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Camden Yards by debutante9 (Kumari)
mariez:
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on August 12, 2007, 01:42:25 pm ---You know there is a chance that she doesn't know where this is going to end either. I write like that most of the time, I make some sort of outline and then when I start writing the chapter, I find out what the characters want exactly, and sometimes it's different from what I had in mind for them. So Kumari might write like that too and she might know where the story is heading, but doesn't yet know the path the characters are going to take. It's interesting though, I would love to hear more about how she writes.
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Oh, I like how you put that - knowing where the story is headed, but not the path. And with a story like CY, so many of the paths are minefields!
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on August 12, 2007, 01:42:25 pm ---Aaaah yes, it's more thoughtless than selfish, you are right. Yes, I think there will be a lot more to the whole parents story.
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Considering they've been best friends for 15 years, I'm guessing Ennis has met Jack's parents. Now I'm wondering what he thinks of them and what they think of him.
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on August 12, 2007, 01:42:25 pm ---Reckless, definitely, I think they are gonna get caught up in each other even more. Well, that's what 15 years of denial does to you, right? If it suddenly comes out, it doesn't go back in, that's for sure.
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No turning back now- they have definitely crossed the point of no return. Those first stages of intense romantic love and lust are so intense - it's hard not to be reckless - and even more so with these two because, as you've pointed out, there are years of bottled up feelings on top of all that. Whew!
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on August 12, 2007, 01:42:25 pm ---Hey you know what I thought? There's no way Ennis can go home after well, you know, coming in his pants three times, right? LOL! So, next chapter will start with a shower scene! There! What do you think? Let's send in a request!
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:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Mel, that's hilarious.
OMG, CYJack + CYEnnis + Shower = Marie's head exploding! :o
Hope you're writing! :-*
mvansand76:
--- Quote ---Considering they've been best friends for 15 years, I'm guessing Ennis has met Jack's parents. Now I'm wondering what he thinks of them and what they think of him.
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Oh yeah, they might consider themselves upper class and Ennis and his family not worthy?
--- Quote ---No turning back now- they have definitely crossed the point of no return. Those first stages of intense romantic love and lust are so intense - it's hard not to be reckless - and even more so with these two because, as you've pointed out, there are years of bottled up feelings on top of all that. Whew!
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Yeah, I wonder where she is gonna take that. CYJack+CYEnnis+Bottled up feelings= *PHEW*
--- Quote ---:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Mel, that's hilarious.
OMG, CYJack + CYEnnis + Shower = Marie's head exploding! :o
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Nice equation! LOL! Mine is exploding too, wish I could write it!
--- Quote ---Hope you're writing! :-*
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Oh yes, I am!!!! I am not gonna be able to post this Friday though, this chapter needs to be just right, so I will work on it on my Holiday, and I might even post two chapters of Altitude when I come back. I am posting the first chapter of Liberation tomorrow!
:D
Oh I have to ask you something else, I will send you a PM.
Mel :)
mariez:
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on August 13, 2007, 12:46:48 pm --- Oh yeah, they might consider themselves upper class and Ennis and his family not worthy?
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I haven't thought that far ahead yet, but, from what Jack said about his mother, that's a possibility. I think "consider themselves" is the right phrase. From what Jack said, his mother is a bit pretentious.
The "equations" for CYJack and CYEnnis are endless, arent' they? LOL! I hope we get at least one equation in the next chapter! ;D
I'm looking forward to the first chapter of "Liberation"! It's nice that you've got two more fics started, especially since RWYA is coming to a (perfect) end. ;)
mvansand76:
--- Quote ---The "equations" for CYJack and CYEnnis are endless, arent' they? LOL! I hope we get at least one equation in the next chapter! ;D
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CYEnnis+CYJack+shower= :o
CYEnnis+CYJack+tent= :o
CYEnnis+CYJack+fishing trip= :o
CYEnnis+CYJack+away game= :o
CYEnnis+CYJack+anywhere alone= :o
--- Quote ---I'm looking forward to the first chapter of "Liberation"! It's nice that you've got two more fics started, especially since RWYA is coming to a (perfect) end. ;)
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Yeah, I am planning to update Liberation one week and the week after, Altitude, so that I post a new chapter every week!
I read a great comment on Kumari's lj, somebody said that Jack will be more upset that Ennis didn't tell him about Abbey because that would mean that they lost some part of the close friendship that they used to have and that makes Jack realise that they might not be able to have both: be best friends AND lovers.
What do you think?
mariez:
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on August 14, 2007, 08:19:20 am ---CYEnnis+CYJack+shower= :o
CYEnnis+CYJack+tent= :o
CYEnnis+CYJack+fishing trip= :o
CYEnnis+CYJack+away game= :o
CYEnnis+CYJack+anywhere alone= :o
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Never liked math this much before. ;D
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on August 14, 2007, 08:19:20 am ---I read a great comment on Kumari's lj, somebody said that Jack will be more upset that Ennis didn't tell him about Abbey because that would mean that they lost some part of the close friendship that they used to have and that makes Jack realise that they might not be able to have both: be best friends AND lovers.
What do you think?
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Yeah, it's what Jack fears immediately after that first kiss in Chapter 5:
He walked towards the couch with his back to Ennis, telling himself that he would show some restraint for once in his life. He wouldn’t fuck up what was pure, his only true thing.
Things will be different, that's for sure - how could they not be? They have entered uncharted territory. But the way they transitioned between awkward sex and regular talk shows me that they have an ingrained comfort level with each other that they don't have with anyone else. And I think (I hope?) that this is what will see them through what will undoubtedly be some very rocky times ahead. It's also the core of the story and what makes this premise so fascinating to me.
(Yay for Liberation!) :)
Marie
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