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He, a poem by ifyoucantfixit
ifyoucantfixit:
Thanks guys, i appreciate your comments, i do.. more than you will know.
\ janice
injest:
{{{Janice}}}
hard day?
ifyoucantfixit:
Yes He was in my mind all day.
ifyoucantfixit:
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The Phantom
The chill is deep
and the pain is still
the feeling is unspoken
you left me a neap
there is no sure thing
of which I am aware
What so offended thee
Was it that i cared?
whenst thy nearness burnt
did i frighten you with phantom?
Was that the offense I made.
Will it ere be so,
will it never heal?
Or shall i always have
this inner pain I feel.
sorry to use your space.
injest:
--- Quote from: ifyoucantfixit on December 08, 2007, 12:55:43 pm ---
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The Phantom
The chill is deep
and the pain is still
the feeling is unspoken
you left me a neap
there is no sure thing
of which I am aware
What so offended thee
Was it that i cared?
whenst thy nearness burnt
did i frighten you with phantom?
Was that the offense I made.
Will it ere be so,
will it never heal?
Or shall i always have
this inner pain I feel.
sorry to use your space.
--- End quote ---
:( :( :'(
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