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A Little Something Extra-another winner by Sienata
RouxB:
...or Sienasta for this story. Ennis as a restaurant owner in Memphis, Jack as an actor filming a movie from a John Grisham novel there. As yet no smut and it's still hawt! She had me at hello...
http://siennasta.livejournal.com/
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Bigheart:
--- Quote from: RouxB on February 20, 2007, 02:57:20 am ---...or Sienasta for this story. Ennis as a restaurant owner in Memphis, Jack as an actor filming a movie from a John Grisham novel there. As yet no smut and it's still hawt! She had me at hello...
http://siennasta.livejournal.com/
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She has me hooked too, Roux! Totally! Thanks for starting this thread! :-*
This whole story is WONDERFUL. I LOVE IT! Every single word!
I love how she has Ennis and Jack thinking about each other all the time but trying desparately not to. In the last chapter I loved Jack just giving in and going to see Ennis at the restaurant. God, that whole scene at the bar was like nothing else!
This lines were just so great:
“Ever think maybe I want to buy you lunch?”
It was an opening... a really, really small one, but Jack took it anyway, knew it was all he was going to get. He stood up, leaned over the bar towards Ennis. “I’d rather you bought it when you could eat it with me.”
The HOT sexual tension is amazing, they are so hot and horny for each other and the way she writes that just blows me away.
These lines were also so so hot to me, just oozing sex..
Ennis pushed himself a little bit farther over the bar, till their faces were almost touching. At the last second, he angled to the side, let his mouth slide soft against Jack’s ear. “Do you really think anyone who saw us together would ever believe we’re just friends?” Ennis whispered. Jack could barely hear him, not because of the noise of the bar, but because of the sudden blood rush in his head, the over loud throb of his heart.... all caused just from the touch of his lips on his skin......
Wow.
It's a wonderful story and I love it to death!
littleguitar:
I can't believe i still haven't read this one :-\
Maybe that's what I'll do with my sick day today, I love her stories :)
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: littleguitar on February 20, 2007, 11:45:38 am ---I can't believe i still haven't read this one :-\
Maybe that's what I'll do with my sick day today, I love her stories :)
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Aww yeah, you're sick :( I read on Helen's journal that you have some kind of food poisoning?? :( That's just terrible, Mandy :( I hope you feel better soon, I'll keep my fingers crossed :)
And YES! Go read this one if you feel up to it! It's SO worth it :)
:-*
littleguitar:
Aw thanks June! I'm not sure if it was food poisoning or some really bad flu. I went to the ER but came home before I got a diagnosis or anything because the wait was taking too long and I'd started feeling a bit better.
how did it end up on Helen's journal? or did I leave a comment that I'm not remembering... LOL I guess I've been pretty out of it...
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