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The Bull and Its Rider, by littleguitar
Bigheart:
Well I don't mind at all, Mandy! :-*
**SPOILERS**
I'm in Mandy! Great start! WOW! How do you do it??!
I love Jack going out at night to watch the stars and I loved how you had Ennis come into the story :) It's comforting to me knowing Ennis will be around the ranch now. Poor Jack :( *sigh*
I loved this little line, it's beautiful:
He grinned at her, a playful sparkle that warmed the air the woman breathed,
I have absolutely no problems with the age difference, it's hardly anything to me.
Looking forward to more, Mandy! :-*
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: littleguitar on February 26, 2007, 08:42:41 pm ---Guys, I've started a new story :-\
Um, here you go...
The Bull and Its Rider, Chapter 1
http://minchout.livejournal.com/22244.html
As always, comments and con. crit. welcome!
and if anyone is annoyed by me starting a new thread for this, let me know and I'll move it to one of my other threads....
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What is that undecided smiley doing there? No need for that!!!! I am gonna read this today and come back and comment!
mariez:
Well, I'm hooked -
I was trying to limit the number of fics I was reading, thinking I would wait for some to be completed before starting others, but when I read this:
Sometimes they felt as numerous as the stars in that sky he loved so much. But most nights, he could feel their passing, the ticking away of them loud in his ears as he wished that just for once he had more time to be at peace with the world.
and this:
He couldn’t remember ever wishing for night to fade into day, but if it meant seeing this man more clearly then he’d wish for it with all his heart.
How am I supposed to resist? Now I'll have to go and find the rest of your fics and get sucked into them, too. Might as well wave the white flag and surrender completely! LOL!!
Thanks,
Marie
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 27, 2007, 09:41:49 am ---Well, I'm hooked -
I was trying to limit the number of fics I was reading, thinking I would wait for some to be completed before starting others, but when I read this:
Sometimes they felt as numerous as the stars in that sky he loved so much. But most nights, he could feel their passing, the ticking away of them loud in his ears as he wished that just for once he had more time to be at peace with the world.
and this:
He couldn’t remember ever wishing for night to fade into day, but if it meant seeing this man more clearly then he’d wish for it with all his heart.
How am I supposed to resist? Now I'll have to go and find the rest of your fics and get sucked into them, too. Might as well wave the white flag and surrender completely! LOL!!
Thanks,
Marie
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wow Marie, that is some gift you have there, saying exactly what i was thinking!! ;).
Maybe we could start a support group ;D
littleguitar:
--- Quote from: Snuitje on February 27, 2007, 06:43:45 am ---What is that undecided smiley doing there? No need for that!!!! I am gonna read this today and come back and comment!
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LOL Mel, the undecided smiliey is me thinking that I'm insane for starting a third story... and, to top it off, this isn't even the story I was planning on starting, this just randomly came out when I sat down to work on JBLaY yesterday.
So, I have a fourth plot bunny rolling around in my head now. But, too bad that story requires a lot of research, and I just don't think I can handle that at the moment...
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