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Another Side of the Story by marlb42 (aileb)

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Cameron:
Hi,

Just wanted to say Chapter 5 is done.

http://aileb42.livejournal.com/2214.html

Please don't be shy, feel free to make any comments.
Thanks for reading it.

Marl

mariez:
Hi Marl,

Chapter 5 was a heartbreaker.  I could have cried when she offered to pay for a motel room and when Billy never even looked at her.  Cassie is in such desperate need of guidance.  Sigh.  And you've also given us a reminder of what a cold, cruel world high school can be. 

Cassie surprised me at the end - good for her! - but I'm wondering where she goes from there. 

Thanks,
Marie

Cameron:
Hi,

Just wanted to let you know that Chapters 6 and 7 are now both up.

If you are new, I do admit this is different than other Fan Fiction. I so do hope that you give it a try.

If you have been reading, I do hope you enjoy these chapters.

http://aileb42.livejournal.com/2554.html

http://aileb42.livejournal.com/2742.html

Of course, all comments are so welcomed.

Marleen

mariez:
Hi Marl,

Nice chapters.  Poor Cassie.  I knew it was coming - but I wasn't sure how - I guess I still don't know exactly how.

 I liked how you conveyed in a lot of little ways how young these characters still are.  Their hormones and emotions are beyond their wisdom and experience - as was true for all of us.  I'm curious as to what will happen next.

Thanks,
Marie

Cameron:
Hi,

Chapter 8 is posted.

Not quite up to meeting you know who, but almost.

http://aileb42.livejournal.com/2828.html

If you are reading, I do hope you are enjoying it a little.

Marl

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