Brokeback Mountain: Our Community's Common Bond > Brokeback Mountain Fan Fiction & Poetry
Full Count, by debutante9 (Kumari)
twistedude:
Chapter 1 was a GAS! I've been up with a dead cow all night, so I haven't read chapter two yet (just posted yesterday, I think).
Boy, can she write!
mariez:
This was recommended recently in the Recs thread and Chapter 4 is up! (Kumari states in her Author's Notes: This is going to be a shortish story, not a lot of chapters.
http://debutante9.livejournal.com/14839.html
SPOILER
This story is wonderfully unique and well-written. Here's a little sampling:
.....“No, it was never a game, not to me. Sometimes it was like you were in the relationship by yourself, making up shit for the two of us to say, like a script. I was just being myself during all those wild times we had and I thought I could do that with you. That was me then, this is me now. You interested?"
Ennis scowled and threw his hands in the air. “I’m always interested in you, unfortunately.”
Jack took a step forward. “Are you?”
“Yes…but…ugh! Fuck you, Jack! What do you want? I have a boyfriend, and it’s good, my life is good.”
“Good is good enough? I can do better than good.” ......
Marie
mvansand76:
I looooooved the latest chapter.... I adore the little details she puts in the story and the minute observations! I even liked the sex between Carson and Ennis! Now how did that happen? :laugh:
Anyway, whaddayathink? Is this one gonna have a happy ending? I seriously doubt it somehow!
mariez:
SPOILERS
--- Quote from: Snavel del Snuit on July 26, 2007, 04:35:58 pm ---I looooooved the latest chapter.... I adore the little details she puts in the story and the minute observations! I even liked the sex between Carson and Ennis! Now how did that happen? :laugh:
Anyway, whaddayathink? Is this one gonna have a happy ending? I seriously doubt it somehow!
--- End quote ---
Yes, minute observations .... I like the way you put that. Oh yeah, Ennis and Carson were seriously hot together, weren't they? ;D And Carson is a great guy - very likeable. And I like that he's a great guy. I think it adds a lot of depth to the story. I'm not sure about a happy ending for this one either.....I can see it going either way.
(I could be wrong....but I think CY should be next in her "rotation." (If she goes in order, that is!)
Marie
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: mariez on July 26, 2007, 04:51:00 pm ---SPOILERS
Yes, minute observations .... I like the way you put that. Oh yeah, Ennis and Carson were seriously hot together, weren't they? ;D And Carson is a great guy - very likeable. And I like that he's a great guy. I think it adds a lot of depth to the story. I'm not sure about a happy ending for this one either.....I can see it going either way.
(I could be wrong....but I think CY should be next in her "rotation." (If she goes in order, that is!)
Marie
--- End quote ---
Yeah, they were def. hot together, and it really is the first time I think that about Ennis (or Jack for that matter) together with somebody else. I like him a lot too, he is not the sterotype boring guy who is just not the one for Ennis... he is a multi-layered character.
Oh yes, that's the first thing I thought when I saw the update for FC! Hahaha...
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