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RouxB:
http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/1057163.html


If you don't have enough kink in your life, try this new fic by Wannabebrit. It has just started so if you are a wait-til-it's-finished kind a person (I try to be but just can't resist reading every new one that pops up)  keep it on the back-burner. If you like to torture yourself waiting for updates, chapters 1 and 2 are posted. It is AU!AU with Jack in NYC moving in with Ennis after his (Jack's) apartment is sold. Mr. delMar is quite the enigma and curiosity just might get our Jack into some serious, um, trouble.

Somebody read it and let's dish.

roux the  O0

mariez:
Hey, Roux -


SPOILER





Yeah, just from skimming the comments, it's obvious that Wannabebrit has pushed a lot of buttons with this one,  ;D and I can see why:

“Ain’t no one breaking me, Ennis.” Jack resisted the urge to reach out, and pull Ennis forward, and kiss him, touch him, do anything to him. He wanted to see just where this was going. He felt like he was on the edge of a cliff, about to either fly or fall.

“No, I don’t believe in breaking in something that’s so resistant to it. Sometimes it’s better to let the animal go. Some are just better in the wild. But what I like most is taking something wild and earning its trust, letting it allow me to take the reins, and showing it what we can do together.” Ennis paused, and ran his hand down Jack’s arms, their hands touching, as Ennis pulled him away from the door. “I don’t like anything tame, never have.”   

Guh.  The second chapter followed the first pretty quickly, let's hope the third follows suit. 

Marie

RouxB:
She did a great job setting this up-the end of chapter two just sizzled. I was afraid to read DrugDealer!Jack and that turned out to be one of my most fave fics out there. I'm curious to see just how far Wannabebrit goes with this...

littleguitar:
Oh man, roux!! I had to sign in for a minute to rec this fic. I'm loving it so far!

The beautiful thing about this, is every single sentence seems to have a double meaning. Ennis giving Jack the water bottle but not taking one for himself because "I know my limits, but I don't know yours"... uh, *thud*

and the entire conversation about Sage being obediant. Then the wild stalion... um, I really don't even have words. This fic has me hook, line and sinker.

Alexis is definitely going to ruffle some feathers with this one though. I just really hope people will go in with open minds and realize that BDSM doesn't fit the stereotypes and stigmas most people think of and that, a lot of times, it isn't even about sex, but trust and loving relationships and mutual consent so that both partners get what they want out of the situation.

The biggest complaint I'm seeing so far is "Jack is the submissive one, again" and "Jack is in the feminine role". I wish people would stop thinking with those stereotypes though and realize that being the submissive partner in BDSM doesn't exactly mean what it sounds like. The sub is actually the one with the most power because they give permission and allow everything to happen and say when to stop. Without the sub allowing the use of his/her body, nothing could happen. The dom's pleasure is entirely dependant on the sub allowing it.

Anyway, sorry to rant about that, but some of the discussion I've been seeing about this story has been frustrating me. I think this is going to be a very interesting ride!

littleguitar:
oh, and she said she'll have the third out either tomorrow or wednesday! Yippee!

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