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Brokeback Mountain: Our Community's Common Bond => The Lighter Side => Topic started by: tforster on September 12, 2009, 10:49:00 pm

Title: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
Post by: tforster on September 12, 2009, 10:49:00 pm
I'm not sure if this has been done yet... sorry if it's not an original idea for the group...

Brokeback Haiku
Just remember... first line = five syllables, 2nd = 7, 3rd = 5

Here's mine:

cowboys on mountain
love is a force of nature
descend to heartbreak
Title: Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
Post by: Lynne on September 12, 2009, 11:44:12 pm
I think there are some haiku posted in various areas like in Fan Fiction or Creative Writing, but this is a good idea.  I'll try to work something up!  Thanks for starting this thread!

 8)
Title: Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
Post by: retropian on September 13, 2009, 02:10:41 am
on the mountainside
Junes full moon lights a puptent
two ranch hands entwined
Title: Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
Post by: retropian on September 13, 2009, 06:31:39 am
blue wyoming sky
shy cowboy looks up to meet
blue wyoming eyes
Title: Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
Post by: tforster on September 13, 2009, 10:17:13 pm
Oh, retropian... you are good!


Title: Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
Post by: retropian on September 14, 2009, 02:19:34 am
Oh, retropian... you are good!




Gee, thanks. :)

come, climb the mountain
come, live the sweet life with me
how could you say no?
Title: Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
Post by: southendmd on October 19, 2009, 03:55:45 pm

just for a moment
he sends up a prayer of thanks
it rides on the wind
Title: Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
Post by: southendmd on October 19, 2009, 03:58:27 pm
blue wyoming sky
shy cowboy looks up to meet
blue wyoming eyes

OMG, Ian, that is awesome.
Title: Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
Post by: retropian on October 20, 2009, 09:02:55 am
OMG, Ian, that is awesome.

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. ;D