Author Topic: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie  (Read 140858 times)

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #110 on: January 13, 2008, 01:52:43 pm »
ah hahahaha


well ladies i Hope this was worth the wait!  I can't wait to see the looks on your faces after reading THIS chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/242510.html  "Chapter 23"

Well, what can I say??

I'm glad I wasn't drinking anything while reading this chapter, otherwise, I might be in for a new computer by now!

 :o  :o  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I sooooooooo want to hear Ellery now! I wonder what happened with the cuffs? Colson is supposed to be handy with all sorts of 'tools' right? Okay, clearly not police tools!  :laugh:  :laugh:

Priceless, Louise! You never cease to amaze me.

Update soon please.  :)
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #111 on: January 13, 2008, 02:15:46 pm »
Oh boy that was funny. It,s gonna be priceless when Dupree arrives and tries to get the cuffs off. I think everyone is going to be extreemly embarrassed lol. I think they should stick to scarves in future lol. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #112 on: January 13, 2008, 03:57:38 pm »
and another unexpected twist in our er,

police procedural.  Who knew this was a police procedure?  hahah. 

http://louisev.livejournal.com/242761.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #113 on: January 13, 2008, 04:39:42 pm »
and another unexpected twist in our er,

police procedural.  Who knew this was a police procedure?  hahah. 

http://louisev.livejournal.com/242761.html


'Twist', is right!

 :laugh:  :laugh:

Oh, Louise, this is so much fun! *claps hands* Great stuff!



Ellery opened his eyes. “I’m not sure this qualifies as takin it easy over the weekend, boy.”


Ain't that the truth. Never a dull moment in Tourmaline!

Thanks Louise.  :-*





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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #114 on: January 13, 2008, 07:35:11 pm »
Colson is such a bad boy- never let it be said he doesn't take advantage of a prime opportunity to get fancy (& he sure knows that his man can be convinced-even under the circumstances.

And what's up with Jeremy?? Why so nervous? Is he still crushing on his boss?? Nick might get a little jealous!

I loved Ellery threatening Colson with no sugar & Colson laughing it off as the empty threat it was!!

You're the love of my life
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Take my hand, lead me there

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With you alone I am free

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #115 on: January 13, 2008, 10:47:11 pm »

Oh, Louise, this is so much fun! *claps hands* Great stuff!


SPOILERS



Yes!  More applause coming from this way!  Along with "Brava! and 'More, More"!   :laugh:

I love  that Colson found the humor in the situation - and how he used it to his advantage!  And how funny that Ellery threatened to cut him off - yeah, right, Ellery!   :laugh:  Thanks, Louise!

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #116 on: January 13, 2008, 11:05:44 pm »
Yes unfortunately Ellery came up with the ultimate empty threat.  And Colson knows him much too well!

I am glad you are enjoying the lighter direction the story is going in, I am having fun writing it!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #117 on: January 15, 2008, 09:06:07 pm »
and the hopefully satisfying.... chapter 26!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/242988.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #118 on: January 15, 2008, 11:10:59 pm »
and the hopefully satisfying.... chapter 26!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/242988.html

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More than satisfying, Louise!  So Jeremy thought he'd have to file a police report?  Oh, my - no wonder he was so nervous!    :laugh:  And OMG - can you even imagine Wes coming to their aid?  Colson would've died! 

I loved Ellery and Jeremy commiserating with each other about jealous spouses!  Aww..poor Nicky waiting at home.  I hope Jeremy makes it up to him.   ;)

Terrific, Louise!  Thanks!

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #119 on: January 16, 2008, 12:36:36 pm »
 
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I dare say Jeremy might have to bring home flowers or something Marie!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”