New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie

[frantic65]

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Damn, Louise - with all this talk, somebody in Tourmaline needs to break into their toy drawers right quick! LOL!

Marie

Can you imagine all the trouble these boys would get into if they had had the internet available?? OMG look at the ideas Colson gets from his own imagination while mucking out stalls!! 

[mariez]

Can you imagine all the trouble these boys would get into if they had had the internet available?? OMG look at the ideas Colson gets from his own imagination while mucking out stalls!! 

LOL!  The mind boggles.  Although....I've got to say that I'd put Colson's stall-mucking imagination up against the best of them!  It's always those quiet ones, you know.....another reason why I can't wait to find out exactly what Jeremy told Nicky "in the dark." 

Was that an obvious enough hint?   

Marie

[frantic65]

LOL!  The mind boggles.  Although....I've got to say that I'd put Colson's stall-mucking imagination up against the best of them!  It's always those quiet ones, you know.....another reason why I can't wait to find out exactly what Jeremy told Nicky "in the dark." 

Was that an obvious enough hint?    

Marie

Subtle as a sledgehammer!!    Now the real question is....will N&J co-operate & share their secrets with Louise??? 

PS. Thanks for the happier diversions bettermost buddiesl. This media crap is bringing me down again!! 

[louisev]

I wrote this hours ago and never posted the link!

For those of you who get your updates here, here is chapter 42 with Colson's new theory about Paula:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/247379.html  "Chapter 42"

[mariez]

http://louisev.livejournal.com/247379.html  "Chapter 42"

SPOILERS



This was a great conversation between Ellery and Colson.  Everything about it was so real - not only the dialogue, but their little gestures and expressions, as well.  How Colson grunted and chuckled, shook his head slowly, "brandished" his biscuit, studied Ellery quietly.  And I like that we can see how Ellery's mood is now glum and pensive, as opposed to the angry, cavalier attitude he displayed at the office.  He is truly in a quandary about the situation and his own feelings. 

But, hey, on the bright side, it appears that Colson did his part to keep the economy of Tourmaline going!  LOL!

Thanks!
Marie

[souxi]

I wrote this hours ago and never posted the link!

For those of you who get your updates here, here is chapter 42 with Colson's new theory about Paula:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/247379.html  "Chapter 42"

You mean to tell me, that you wrote this hours ago, and we had to wait??? tsk tsk tsk, that will never do. Right, as punishment for that, we expect an extra long chapter today, FULL of smut with the new toys. 

[louisev]

You mean to tell me, that you wrote this hours ago, and we had to wait??? tsk tsk tsk, that will never do. Right, as punishment for that, we expect an extra long chapter today, FULL of smut with the new toys. 

hahahah you caught me.  I got so caught up in editing and posting the chapters of "Looking for Answers" that I didn't realize that I hadn't announced it.  Of course I think you were long in bed by then, Souxi!

[souxi]

hahahah you caught me.  I got so caught up in editing and posting the chapters of "Looking for Answers" that I didn't realize that I hadn't announced it.  Of course I think you were long in bed by then, Souxi!

I probably was. When I check back here tomorow, I expect to find a LONG page filled with smut with the new toys.

[louisev]

hahahaha !  man alive, I sure miss you demanding readers!

[belbbmfan]

SPOILERS



This was a great conversation between Ellery and Colson.  Everything about it was so real - not only the dialogue, but their little gestures and expressions, as well.  How Colson grunted and chuckled, shook his head slowly, "brandished" his biscuit, studied Ellery quietly.  And I like that we can see how Ellery's mood is now glum and pensive, as opposed to the angry, cavalier attitude he displayed at the office.  He is truly in a quandary about the situation and his own feelings. 

But, hey, on the bright side, it appears that Colson did his part to keep the economy of Tourmaline going!  LOL!

Thanks!
Marie

What? I didn't read about no muffins...

You're a master of dialogue Louise, but, of course, we already knew that.

Great chapter, thanks!