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Offline belbbmfan

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #400 on: February 24, 2008, 02:52:26 pm »
Quote from: louise van hine on February 24, 2008, 02:14:01 pm
SPOILEr!




yes Nick is a boy!  excellent analysis.  Good thing he married a man who can be talked into reassuring him without blowing up and humiliating him.  And besides, at the root of it all, he knows what Nick wants.  He wants his sweet thing all to himself!!!

Yep, despite Jeremy's inexperience with relationships, he's handeling Nick's insecurity very well. A sweet thing for sure.  :-*

And did you say married? Oh, do tell Louise!  :)

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #401 on: February 24, 2008, 03:05:40 pm »
Quote from: louise van hine on February 24, 2008, 02:14:01 pm
SPOILEr!




yes Nick is a boy!  excellent analysis.  Good thing he married a man who can be talked into reassuring him without blowing up and humiliating him.  And besides, at the root of it all, he knows what Nick wants.  He wants his sweet thing all to himself!!!

Yep he sure does want him all to himself, and when I look on here in the morning, I expect to read ALL about it in glorious detail Louise. Note:  GLORIOUS.  :laugh: :laugh:
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #402 on: February 24, 2008, 06:59:19 pm »
Quote from: belbbmfan on February 24, 2008, 02:52:26 pm
Yep, despite Jeremy's inexperience with relationships, he's handeling Nick's insecurity very well. A sweet thing for sure.  :-*

And did you say married? Oh, do tell Louise!  :)

oh my goodness I did say that didn't I?  Guess what I must have been thinking!!!!

Now I have to go write some of that glorious detail!


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #403 on: February 24, 2008, 10:13:41 pm »
ok here are a few:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/255132.html  'Chapter 68'
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #404 on: February 24, 2008, 11:21:50 pm »
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“There’s a couple a things on my list!” Jeremy protested.

Well, Louise, you know this begs the question - what else is on Jeremy's list?   ;D

And I see that the old saying about "the more things change ......"  still applies to the Red Stallion gang!  For goodness sake, are Ellery and Jeremy the only ones capable of buying a few mousetraps?  Sheesh, you'd think this was some unsolvable dilemma for all the carrying on over mice! LOL!

I don't really need to tell you that we're looking forward to the next chapter, do I? 

Thanks, Louise!
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #405 on: February 25, 2008, 12:18:37 am »
yes I can imagine you are expecting it, Marie!

I needed to put a little thought into the direction of the story don't you know!
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #406 on: February 25, 2008, 02:52:02 am »
Quote from: louise van hine on February 24, 2008, 10:13:41 pm
ok here are a few:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/255132.html  'Chapter 68'

Gosh, is it chapter 68 already?  :o You have been writing a blue streak Louise.

And it looks like Colson and Ellery have started a trend in Tourmaline. I wonder how long it will take before this reaches the Red Stallion.

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #407 on: February 25, 2008, 08:35:46 am »
Quote from: louise van hine on February 25, 2008, 12:18:37 am
...I needed to put a little thought into the direction of the story don't you know!

A little thought is good, Louise - we love the way your mind works (and we'll follow you in any direction, of course  ;)


Quote from: belbbmfan on February 25, 2008, 02:52:02 am
And it looks like Colson and Ellery have started a trend in Tourmaline. I wonder how long it will take before this reaches the Red Stallion.

LOL!  Yes, I can see it now - a run on all the handcuffs available in Tourmaline, with the pawn shop owners wondering why their supplies have been depleted! 

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #408 on: February 25, 2008, 11:37:07 pm »
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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #409 on: February 26, 2008, 08:00:41 am »
Quote from: louise van hine on February 25, 2008, 11:37:07 pm
okay gang, chapter 69:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/255513.html


“Uh... ma’am?” Wayne blinked at the receiver. “Ain’t Ellery there?”


 :laugh:  :laugh:

I want to see the look on his face!!


OMG Louise, that conservation between Wayne and Edna was just hilarious! And exactly what he needed!

You must have had fun writing that.

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:   :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Can you tell I had fun reading it?  :D
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