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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #410 on: February 26, 2008, 08:03:45 am »
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Ha!  Maybe Ellery should've hired Edna as the new server/bouncer!  LOL!  Very funny how Wayne changed his tune from "He even finds me kinda hot..."   to   "...loves me like his own ... nephew. Or somethin.”

Uh, yeah.  Or somethiin.   :laugh:  :laugh:

The Brown ranch is looking more and more like an ideal place for the twins.   ;)

Yep, Fabienne - I had a lot of fun reading that, too!   :D

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Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #411 on: February 26, 2008, 02:41:38 pm »
Oh, my -  Nicky looks like he means business!


Time we had a little fun ourselves. Chain ya to the bed, give you a nice spankin an then ride you like a racehorse. What a ya say?”

The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #412 on: February 26, 2008, 02:48:08 pm »

“Uh... ma’am?” Wayne blinked at the receiver. “Ain’t Ellery there?”


 :laugh:  :laugh:

I want to see the look on his face!!


OMG Louise, that conservation between Wayne and Edna was just hilarious! And exactly what he needed!

You must have had fun writing that.

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Can you tell I had fun reading it?  :D

Wayne had no traction with Edna whatsoever! And yes, I did have fun!  Wayne is always a bucket of surprises.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #413 on: February 26, 2008, 02:49:25 pm »
Oh, my -  Nicky looks like he means business!


Time we had a little fun ourselves. Chain ya to the bed, give you a nice spankin an then ride you like a racehorse. What a ya say?”


poor old Jeremy is starting to feel like a rookie in the bedroom again!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #414 on: February 26, 2008, 03:10:34 pm »
poor old Jeremy is starting to feel like a rookie in the bedroom again!

So does this mean that Licky Nicky will be giving Jeremy some more "lessons" tonight then Louise?  :laugh:

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #415 on: February 26, 2008, 03:20:32 pm »
oohhhhh... I dunno......

muah haahahahaha
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #416 on: February 26, 2008, 03:20:50 pm »
Oh, my -  Nicky looks like he means business!


Time we had a little fun ourselves. Chain ya to the bed, give you a nice spankin an then ride you like a racehorse. What a ya say?”


OMG Marie!

'We're supposed to guard the sheep, not eat 'em'

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #417 on: February 26, 2008, 03:46:39 pm »
Wentworth Miller again I presume ?
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #418 on: February 26, 2008, 03:48:36 pm »
oohhhhh... I dunno......

muah haahahahaha

Go on Louise, do your evil worst lol.  :laugh: :laugh:

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Re: New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
« Reply #419 on: February 26, 2008, 11:50:27 pm »
well this should satisfy... even Souxi!!!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/255812.html  Chapter 70
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”