Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235837 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1970 on: October 18, 2006, 03:08:24 pm »
June 1963 a very cold moonlit night
For young Jack it had been love at first sight

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1971 on: October 18, 2006, 03:11:57 pm »
June 1963 a very cold moonlit night
For young Jack it had been love at first sight
Ennis was happier that he'd ever been.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1972 on: October 19, 2006, 12:40:31 am »
June 1963 a very cold moonlit night
For young Jack it had been love at first sight
Ennis was happier than he'd ever been
He smiled like a pumpkin on Halloween

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1973 on: October 19, 2006, 12:45:31 am »
June 1963 a very cold moonlit night
For young Jack it had been love at first sight
Ennis was happier than he'd ever been
He smiled like a pumpkin on Halloween.
They came to love each other with all their might.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1974 on: October 19, 2006, 08:37:39 am »
"Aint no reins on this one" he said,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1975 on: October 19, 2006, 10:41:11 am »
"Aint no reins on this one" he said,
As that soft, knowing hand caressed his head,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1976 on: October 19, 2006, 11:04:01 am »
"Aint no reins on this one" he said,
As that soft, knowing hand caressed his head,
So much, so little those three weeks a year.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1977 on: October 19, 2006, 02:32:12 pm »
"Aint no reins on this one" he said,
As that soft, knowing hand caressed his head,
So much, so little those three weeks a year.
He lowered his head as he shed a tear


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1978 on: October 19, 2006, 02:40:12 pm »
"Aint no reins on this one" he said,
As that soft, knowing hand caressed his head,
So much, so little those three weeks a year.
He lowered his head as he shed a tear
Long as I c'n see you, it's ok what lies ahead.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1979 on: October 20, 2006, 08:16:52 am »
That last one is so durn saaaad... *sniff*  :'(

He felt he could paw the white outa the moon,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!