Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[moremojo]

"Cant stand this anymore" he said, with a tear,
Losing his love or his life was the choice to fear,
Jacks arms around him, he fell to the ground,
There in the dust his soul's solace he found,

[Katie77]

"Cant stand this anymore" he said, with a tear,
Losing his love or his life was the choice to fear,
Jacks arms around him, he fell to the ground,
There in the dust his soul's solace he found,
Reassurance from Jack, is what he needed to hear.


For unknown to them, this time was the last,

[moremojo]

For unknown to them, this time was the last,
Their moments of joy were all in the past,

[jpwagoneer1964]

For unknown to them, this time was the last,
Their moments of joy were all in the past,
Twenty years meeting up would be no more.

[moremojo]

For unknown to them, this time was the last,
Their moments of joy were all in the past,
Twenty years meeting up would be no more.
One just beyond reach, the other broken and poor.

[jpwagoneer1964]

For unknown to them, this time was the last,
Their moments of joy were all in the past,
Twenty years meeting up would be no more.
One just beyond reach, the other broken and poor.
Just two shirts in a closet, no more lines to cast.

[moremojo]

ASIDE: I think we may have just written one of the saddest limericks ever.

How about another?:

One wife knew something of the games of her man,

[jpwagoneer1964]

One wife knew something of the games of her man,
For a long time she still loved him, remained his fan.

[moremojo]

One wife knew something of the games of her man,
For a long time she still loved him, remained his fan.
Till lack of fulfillment barraged its way through,

[Katie77]

One wife knew something of the games of her man,
For a long time she still loved him, remained his fan.
Till lack of fulfillment barraged its way through,
So another life, she sought to persue,