Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3236095 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2480 on: January 04, 2007, 06:37:22 pm »
"My dad, he was a fine roper", Ennis said
When Jack just watched him, he went ahead:
"Didn't rodeo much, fer sure....
Called 'em "fuck ups" and more,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2481 on: January 04, 2007, 06:48:38 pm »
"My dad, he was a fine roper", Ennis said
When Jack just watched him, he went ahead:
"Didn't rodeo much, fer sure....
Called 'em "fuck ups" and more, -
but now I see all his wits must'a fled!"  :-*

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2482 on: January 05, 2007, 02:11:57 am »
Jack picked up her hat, and dusted it off,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2483 on: January 05, 2007, 04:12:42 am »
Jack picked up her hat, and dusted it off,
He tried to impress her, tried to look tough ..




(actually, I dont know if he tried to look tough but it rhymes! lol)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2484 on: January 05, 2007, 04:20:43 am »
Jack picked up her hat, and dusted it off,
He tried to impress her, tried to look tough ..
Caught her eye, at the bar that night,

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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2485 on: January 05, 2007, 06:56:35 pm »
Jack picked up her hat, and dusted it off,
He tried to impress her, tried to look tough ..
Caught her eye at the bar that night,
And thought she was quite a sight

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2486 on: January 05, 2007, 07:07:41 pm »
Jack picked up her hat, and dusted it off,
He tried to impress her, tried to look tough ..
Caught her eye at the bar that night,
And thought she was quite a sight
She was no Ennis, but she was quite enough ..

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2487 on: January 05, 2007, 07:46:37 pm »
"You waitin' on a matin' call", she said to Jack,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2488 on: January 06, 2007, 09:29:29 pm »
"You waitin' on a matin' call", she said to Jack,
He looked her over, charm and beauty she didn't lack


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2489 on: January 06, 2007, 10:05:45 pm »
"You waitin' on a matin' call", she said to Jack,
He looked her over, charm and beauty she didn't lack
They danced, but his thoughts, were of some other time
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection