Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3407614 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3890 on: October 28, 2008, 11:41:36 pm »
Brokeback Mountain developed love for two.
Completely alone, and out of view
Found a love, where none was expected.
Never have dreamed  they would get so connected
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3891 on: October 29, 2008, 01:54:25 pm »


Brokeback Mountain developed love for two.
Completely alone, and out of view
Found a love, where none was expected.
Never have dreamed  they would get so connected
But a sucker punch left Jack's face black and blue



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3892 on: October 29, 2008, 02:54:40 pm »



  Aguirre spied, and watched their love



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3893 on: October 29, 2008, 03:07:54 pm »



Aguirre spied, and watched their love
He peeped and pried from high above
He told Jack his uncle was ill.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3894 on: October 29, 2008, 04:30:46 pm »
Aguirre spied, and watched their love
He peeped and pried from high above
He told Jack his uncle was ill.
But was really so jealous he could kill
He too, would have liked to give Ennis a shove.
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3895 on: October 29, 2008, 04:32:39 pm »
When Jack asked for a job the next year
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3896 on: October 29, 2008, 04:52:21 pm »

When Jack asked for a job the next year
He was told,  Ennis hasn't even been here.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3897 on: October 29, 2008, 04:57:54 pm »
When Jack asked for a job the next year
He was told,  Ennis hasn't even been here.
Jack didn't tell Ennis that he thought Aguirre watched them
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3898 on: October 29, 2008, 05:05:55 pm »
When Jack asked for a job the next year
He was told,  Ennis hasn't even been here.
Jack didn't tell Ennis that he thought Aguirre watched them
Or about the comment of the rose and the stem
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3899 on: October 29, 2008, 06:03:16 pm »
When Jack asked for a job the next year
He was told,  Ennis hasn't even been here.
Jack didn't tell Ennis that he thought Aguirre watched them
Or about the comment of the rose and the stem
For that would surely increase Ennis's fear
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain