Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3222898 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2460 on: December 26, 2006, 09:34:00 pm »
They took a few swigs of Old Rose
Felt the chill of the down to their toes.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2461 on: December 26, 2006, 10:38:24 pm »
They took a few swigs of Old Rose
Felt the chill of the down to their toes.
Jack passed Ennis the joint

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2462 on: December 26, 2006, 10:48:27 pm »
They took a few swigs of Old Rose
Felt the chill of the down to their toes.
Jack passed Ennis the joint
came straight to the point
« Last Edit: December 26, 2006, 10:57:27 pm by Ellemeno »



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2463 on: December 26, 2006, 10:51:53 pm »
They took a few swigs of Old Rose
Felt the chill of the down to their toes.
Jack passed Ennis the joint
came straight to the point
What Jack had said only added to his woes
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2464 on: December 26, 2006, 10:58:16 pm »
Ennis leaned back to catch a last look

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2465 on: December 26, 2006, 11:26:26 pm »
Ennis leaned back to catch a last look


                           jack immediately picked up the hook



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2466 on: December 30, 2006, 06:10:38 pm »
Ennis leaned back to catch a last look
Jack immediately picked up the hook,
He saw that Ennis watched him that way


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2467 on: December 30, 2006, 10:19:02 pm »
Ennis leaned back to catch a last look
Jack immediately picked up the hook,
He saw that Ennis watched him that way
And somehow he knew, he'd love him one day,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2468 on: January 01, 2007, 08:33:34 pm »
Ennis leaned back to catch a last look
Jack immediately picked up the hook,
He saw that Ennis watched him that way
And somehow he knew, he'd love him one day,
And the words of this story might end up in a book.


"I aint queer" said Ennis, looking over at Jack,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2469 on: January 01, 2007, 08:47:39 pm »
"I aint queer" said Ennis, looking over at Jack,
"Me neither" Jack said to Ennis looking back
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.