Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3182296 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1670 on: August 30, 2006, 12:06:20 am »
"Am I goin too fast?" she said with a smile,
"I could slow down, although I wanna run a mile".
"Nah, I jes' like the way you're goin", he sighed


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1671 on: September 04, 2006, 09:02:14 am »
"Am I goin too fast?"she said with a smile,
"I could slow down, although I wanna run a mile"
"Nah, I jes like the way you're goin" he sighed,
"I want someone, who's all woman", he lied,




(This limerick, seems like its never gonna get finished}
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1672 on: September 05, 2006, 06:12:01 pm »
Finished at last:


"Am I goin too fast?"she said with a smile,
"I could slow down, although I wanna run a mile"
"Nah, I jes like the way you're goin" he sighed,
"I want someone, who's all woman", he lied, -
he kept longing for Ennis's love all the while.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1673 on: September 06, 2006, 09:01:10 am »
My daddy was right 'bout you rodeo men,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1674 on: September 06, 2006, 03:13:15 pm »
My daddy was right 'bout you rodeo men,
You're all fuck-ups, now till God knows when.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1675 on: September 06, 2006, 03:41:52 pm »
My daddy was right 'bout you rodeo men,
You're all fuck-ups, now till God knows when.
Though how he knows, it's plain to me


Congratulations, Lucise, on #4100!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1676 on: September 06, 2006, 04:23:22 pm »
Congratulations, Lucise, on #4100!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Lee ~  Thank you!  :D


My daddy was right 'bout you rodeo men,
You're all fuck-ups, now till God knows when.
Though how he knows, it's plain to me
"I can be a fuck-up Ennis!  Wanna see?"



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1677 on: September 06, 2006, 10:25:10 pm »
Lee ~  Thank you!  :D
My daddy was right 'bout you rodeo men,
You're all fuck-ups, now till God knows when.
Though how he knows, it's plain to me
"I can be a fuck-up Ennis!  Wanna see?"

As he fell hard for Ennis again.
What Jack remembered and craved in a way he could neither help nor understand was the time that distant summer on Brokeback when Ennis had come up behind him and pulled him close, the silent embrace satisfying some shared and sexless hunger.   -Annie Proulx (Icon by alighttofollow)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1678 on: September 06, 2006, 10:26:51 pm »
New One

I was just sendin' up a prayer of thanks.
« Last Edit: September 06, 2006, 10:30:01 pm by Daniel »
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1679 on: September 07, 2006, 06:20:31 pm »
I was just sendin' up a prayer of thanks.
That you didn't go robbing no banks ..


(sorry,  :P)