Author Topic: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow  (Read 63379 times)

Offline Penthesilea

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #140 on: October 11, 2006, 02:48:52 pm »
She did it. Marakesh completed Lead Me to Your Door. She just posted chapter 22 and an epilogue. The links:

last chapter (22):

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/670716.html#cutid1


epilogue:

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/670828.html#cutid1

I haven't read it yet. I'm sad to see this story come to an end. But it feels natural and I'm happy for closure. No more evil cliffhangers  ;)
I'm darned curious how she made it. Off to LJ.

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #141 on: October 11, 2006, 03:09:02 pm »
Oh I just read this...and it is wonderful.  The epilogue was an absolute master stroke of genius IMO.

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #142 on: October 11, 2006, 07:31:44 pm »
I agree, she did it just right. Brought tears to my eyes at the reunion and their understanding of what they have found together----not to mention GOOD SEX!! SIGH
And I loved the epilog too--very original.  Nice read all the way through.

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #143 on: October 11, 2006, 10:40:40 pm »
I agree, she did it just right. Brought tears to my eyes at the reunion and their understanding of what they have found together----not to mention GOOD SEX!! SIGH
And I loved the epilog too--very original.  Nice read all the way through.

 ;D ;D ;D

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #144 on: October 11, 2006, 10:43:08 pm »
oh amazing! going to read right now....  ;D
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #145 on: October 12, 2006, 12:10:44 am »
I am currently reading the epilogue.
I am sad to see the story end ..

Jess .. You are so young and so talented!
I gotta thank you for the hours of entertainment you gave me with your little gem of a story!  :-*
I hope you keep up with your writing.

Are you planning on continuing with writing more BBM fanfics? :)


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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #146 on: October 12, 2006, 02:32:09 am »
Jess-

I left you a brief pat on the back on LJ but just wanted to say here I too am sad to see the story end but thank you so much for a well-written, imaginative, engaging story. You did indeed rock it.



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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #147 on: October 12, 2006, 02:55:49 am »
;D ;D ;D

Brilliant Jess, well done hun. Oh well, no more chewing then lol, and I can lay off the brandy too. :laugh: :laugh:
Seriously though hun, that story was a masterpiece it really was. The epilogue brought tears to my eyes it did. Any more writing/evil cliffhangers in the offing? No one does evil cliffhangers better than you. Your, just, well, .....evil. ;) ;)
Thanks again hun. Your story was a pleasure to read...even if it did drive me to drink lol.  :laugh: :laugh: tc.xxxx

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #148 on: October 12, 2006, 02:36:58 pm »
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! It's finished?  :'(

I have to go read this NOW!

Question for the author: Do you have another J/E story planned?

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #149 on: October 13, 2006, 07:33:20 am »
Hi Jess, congrats on finishing the story, it was a pleasure to read and the end was beautiful (and I am not only talking about the kind of risky sex in the kitchen where ANYBODY could have walked in... ;)). I also loved your epilogue, very original... Will you start writing something else?