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Offline fernly

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #20 on: June 16, 2006, 11:10:33 am »
Sparrow,
Your story is, well, just wonderful. I've raced through 9 chapters, can't wait to read the latest, and then go back and reread.
Beautifully imagined and written. Ennis and Jack are so real I forget I'm reading.
Thank you!
Fern
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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #21 on: June 16, 2006, 01:06:50 pm »
Quote from: fernly on June 16, 2006, 11:10:33 am
Sparrow,
Your story is, well, just wonderful. I've raced through 9 chapters, can't wait to read the latest, and then go back and reread.
Beautifully imagined and written. Ennis and Jack are so real I forget I'm reading.
Thank you!
Fern

Thanks so much, Fern!

I'm glad to hear that the story is real for you!  I'm trying to keep it as grounded in realism as possble, even though it's already pretty far fetched.  Thanks for the comment, though!

Quote from: lnicoll on June 15, 2006, 12:03:00 am
Oh, I didn't mean to (and hope I didn't) offend her, but if memory serves, she is the one who wanted that smiley, right, elle?

I didn't mean any offense, either!!!  Honestly!  I feel kind of bad now.  Where I come from (Detroit) ghetto is used almost like an adjective in a playful sort of way.  I should have thought before I posted.   :-X
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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #22 on: June 18, 2006, 03:33:18 am »
Quote from: lnicoll on June 15, 2006, 12:03:00 am
but if memory serves, she is the one who wanted that smiley, right, elle?

That's how I remember it.
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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #23 on: June 19, 2006, 03:40:02 am »
WAKE UP YA MAROONS chapters 11, 12 posted about an hour ago, and I was still awake.  I have to go eat a postcard...or an icecream bar, or something.

God, it's worth your life to get something posted on DC, but it sure is worth it in hits...I sent MYSELF a link to my story....what a drag.

Such a patient, beautifully woven story

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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #24 on: June 24, 2006, 05:45:01 pm »
Chapter 13 is up. There must be something in the Geneva Convention about this...well, didn'rt realize they were frixin' to dynamite Brokeback Mountain; learn something new every day...

If you spend a lot of time looking for LMTYD, you're frequently going to be the first one to find it...such a great story!
« Last Edit: June 25, 2006, 03:43:46 am by julie01 »
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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #25 on: June 25, 2006, 11:34:14 am »
Hey just to let anyone know that's interested Chapter 14 should be up fairly soon, let's shoot for Tuesday???

Hopefully I can stick to that.  If sooner, i'll let you know, but I've already written the first part of the chapter.

I think you guys are gonna like this one!!!  ;D
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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #26 on: June 25, 2006, 03:10:27 pm »
Unless one of them dies or leaves, which seems unlikely at this point.
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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #27 on: June 26, 2006, 02:00:41 am »
Quote from: julie01 on June 25, 2006, 03:10:27 pm
Unless one of them dies or leaves, which seems unlikely at this point.

Oh, don't worry.  None a' that for the next chap!  Just some good old fashioned sexual tension...that may perhaps lead to a little more...???  ::evil grin::

I hope the wait will be worth it!
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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #28 on: June 26, 2006, 02:01:58 am »
It appears that the little smiley pops up when ever three question marks are typed in...which wasn't my intention.  The puzzled smiley just looks sad, I was going more for cheecky.

Maybe this one's more suitable.  ;)
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Re: Lead Me to Your Door by marakeshsparrow
« Reply #29 on: June 26, 2006, 10:03:36 pm »
Awesome story...love the different angle..

Please tell me that Jack isnt gonna die...I CANT TAKE IT AGAIN!!!!!

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