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Topic: Brokeback Haiku (Read 22911 times)
moremojo
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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Reply #50 on:
August 25, 2006, 07:17:32 pm »
The girls and the son
Innocent, unwitting seed
Spilled far from true love.
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moremojo
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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August 30, 2006, 09:34:56 pm »
Cowboy's tired feet
Bearing weary body up
Till dusk falls, gently.
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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August 31, 2006, 05:24:36 pm »
Death parts ways, brings light
To the hearts of absent friends
Remembering Truth
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August 31, 2006, 11:47:26 pm »
Asian Art Museum,
an old shoe; an afternoon
with Shuggy: magic!
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"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from
The Wind's Twelve Quarters
moremojo
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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September 01, 2006, 09:32:57 am »
Shuggy from NZ
Made it to San Francisco
To meet online friends?
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September 01, 2006, 11:36:43 am »
Aye, that he did, friend!
back to NZ and his man
beginning of week...
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"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from
The Wind's Twelve Quarters
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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September 05, 2006, 12:09:56 pm »
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Death parts ways, brings light
To the hearts of absent friends
Remembering Truth
WOW, Moremojo!
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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September 05, 2006, 09:41:42 pm »
Ennis with Jack
Sunflower, golden
petels opening to the
warmth of a first spring.
Jack with Ennis
"O thou weed, that smellst
so sweet, the senses ache at
thee," wild columbine.
(quote from
Othello
; wild columbine also is called honeysuckle.)
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"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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September 12, 2006, 11:59:42 am »
(someone said Jack and Ennis would find the previous two haikuis "somewhat puzzling." I didn';t WRITE therm for Jack and Ennis! I wrotre them for you guys....if everything we writte has to be understood by Jack and Ennis, what the hell are they going to make of John Donne, Pablo Naruda and Tobias Hume? Blank verse? Sonnets? Jeez...is everyone laughing at me?)
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"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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September 12, 2006, 12:25:04 pm »
Sonnets sing structure
Blank verse rides the open range
Haiku seek shelter
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