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Offline twistedude

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #60 on: September 12, 2006, 05:07:56 pm »
... 18 th century
couplets tie neat little bows
for us to laugh at.
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #61 on: September 13, 2006, 04:13:55 am »
to get told you can't
write after 34 tough
syllables is hard
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #62 on: September 15, 2006, 06:05:53 pm »
Swift fist across face
Gets the point across, and yet--
Wishing for softness.
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #63 on: September 16, 2006, 03:30:17 pm »
Asleep in a tent
Rain, hail, snow, end o' the world,
Don't care snuggled close.
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... not nobody when in somebody's arms,  ain’t nowhere if somewhere with him.
My man who nothin ever came t’is hand the way he wanted.
‘Cause all he ever wanted was me.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #64 on: September 16, 2006, 03:41:39 pm »
Cowboys ride easy,
Till night falls, fire glows, friends love
All's right with the world.

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... not nobody when in somebody's arms,  ain’t nowhere if somewhere with him.
My man who nothin ever came t’is hand the way he wanted.
‘Cause all he ever wanted was me.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #65 on: September 18, 2006, 10:40:53 am »
Seeing new rider
Traipsing around haiku fields
Makes me happy, warm.

Welcome, jessiwrite, to our haiku thread!
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #66 on: September 18, 2006, 11:37:04 am »
What a cool welcome.
Saddle them Brokeback words up.
Ride sweet fields of love.

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... not nobody when in somebody's arms,  ain’t nowhere if somewhere with him.
My man who nothin ever came t’is hand the way he wanted.
‘Cause all he ever wanted was me.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #67 on: September 18, 2006, 11:20:50 pm »
Welcome! It's always
good to have variety
in the witches' brew!
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #68 on: September 19, 2006, 01:07:24 pm »
Sweet taste in spring grass.
Never be nothin as good,
'Cept sweet touch in snow.

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My man who nothin ever came t’is hand the way he wanted.
‘Cause all he ever wanted was me.

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Re: Brokeback Haiku
« Reply #69 on: September 19, 2006, 09:46:55 pm »
Entering old tent
Seeking rest, pulling off boots
Hot bouquet of feet
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