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Topic: Brokeback Haiku (Read 22984 times)
moremojo
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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
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Reply #10 on:
April 19, 2006, 09:00:25 pm »
Bracing wind, tent flap
Sheltering two boys inside
Finding each other.
Scott
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Re: Haiku
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April 27, 2006, 06:55:33 pm »
Mouth gaping, blood red
Staining desert sage gully
Love's terrible price.
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twistedude
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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
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Reply #12 on:
April 28, 2006, 12:06:36 am »
You said it...
mmmm. pretty girl...(this was right after I got the idea for "Good Old Boy")
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"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from
The Wind's Twelve Quarters
moremojo
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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
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Reply #13 on:
May 01, 2006, 07:06:46 pm »
Shirts entwined, repose
Hidden in trailer corner
Gathering dust, love.
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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
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Reply #14 on:
May 01, 2006, 08:12:01 pm »
Lightning Flat prairie
Scorched grass sighing in the wind
Weeds will hold my love.
And sleeping, the boys
Gather warmth from their bodies
Clasping chilled fingers.
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twistedude
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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
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Reply #15 on:
May 02, 2006, 12:26:45 am »
I write a story--
ugliness pours from me like
pus from a wound..why?
I had to find some
hideous thing in this great
field of beauty, dreams.
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"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from
The Wind's Twelve Quarters
twistedude
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Re: Is this a good place for haikus? Or isn't anyone interested anymore?
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May 04, 2006, 12:37:21 am »
I write a sexless
story-- I'll start the next
with an orgasm
all these paper folk
who have become celluloid--
I love them so much
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"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from
The Wind's Twelve Quarters
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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May 06, 2006, 08:47:14 pm »
Jack, Ennis, frozen
in an Ang Lee ice storm-- we
sweat the sun of hate
"I'm neautral toward fags;
don't want to see your pictures
teach it to my kid."
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"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from
The Wind's Twelve Quarters
moremojo
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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May 12, 2006, 09:48:45 pm »
Mountain postcard, slid
In place by love-trembling hands
Lost green days of youth.
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Re: Brokeback Haiku
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May 12, 2006, 10:09:50 pm »
Recent discoveries:
The truck pulls out--she
lifts her hand from baby's head,
and waves to no one
You breathe as quickly
as I, , yet you hide your mouth--
I want to kiss you.
and do not think, when
you take you hand back, that I
will let it go.
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