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Offline MaineWriter

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #220 on: January 23, 2007, 08:16:03 am »
I knew there was a reason I was updating first thing in the morning (my time). LOL. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter, Fabienne!

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #221 on: January 23, 2007, 08:28:19 am »
Yes - you may be spoiling us - but we LOVE being spoiled like this!   :)

Leslie, I am sitting here with a great big goofy grin on my face!  :laugh:

No wonder you love this chapter - I can't imagine anyone not absolutely loving it!  The truck - and Jack posing against it - the postcards - Ennis and his pent-up yearnin'.  Sigh.  I couldn't love Jack and Ennis - or this story - more!

Thanks for the great start to my day!

Marie
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« Reply #222 on: January 23, 2007, 02:41:48 pm »
Spoil me some more!! How about tomorrow morning? or better yet, tonight?

Like all marrieds and in love for 30+ years, they know each other and do those little things that only make them love each other even more.  The re-enactment of the scene in Signal was perfect, only this time Ennis didn't put his head down and mumble...he wanted to skip over several weeks and go straight to the FNIT!  And the framed postcards...Priceless. 

It just keeps getting better.

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #223 on: January 23, 2007, 03:33:04 pm »
Leslie, I love ALBFS and I love THVOT.



It,s just so lovely to know that after all these years, they are even more in love with each other than ever and so in tune with each other too. Theres nothing they dont know about each other, and nothing they wouldnt do for each other. I,m not ashamed to say that at times, reading this and ALBFS I,ve had tears in my eyes. Thank you Leslie. Your stories are just the best. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #224 on: January 23, 2007, 04:06:30 pm »
I love the love you guys are heaping on me...don't stop! Don't stop! It keeps me inspired!

I also want to thank davidinhartford, who gave me the original idea for the truck (months ago), and jpwagoneer1964, who helped with the description.  David and Mark, thanks!

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #225 on: January 23, 2007, 04:31:06 pm »
I love the love you guys are heaping on me...don't stop! Don't stop! It keeps me inspired!

I also want to thank davidinhartford, who gave me the original idea for the truck (months ago), and jpwagoneer1964, who helped with the description.  David and Mark, thanks!

Leslie

okay, i won't stop  ;D How about some of these, just to say thank you?



and thank you David and Mark!  :)

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #226 on: January 23, 2007, 04:44:21 pm »
I been missin in action 'round here for a while!
I gotta catch up on my chapters .. but since we are all dishing out love right about now ..
I thought I'd add some too ..

Here ya go Leslie:  ;)



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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #227 on: January 23, 2007, 06:40:18 pm »


      that was such a wonderful chapter leslie,,i dont even know how to say...
  it was a bundle of joy...it had all the sweetest and schmoopiest parts,,,,but also
  it was a visual delight...the yard full of friends and relatives,,,watching as jack gets
  his beautiful present from ennis,,,so cute, and ennis soo proud...jack posing by the
  truck and getting ennis all riled up...oh goodness i read it three times...
  thank you and thank you and thank you.....             i loved it        janice



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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #228 on: January 23, 2007, 10:24:15 pm »
Looks to be another treat waiting for me when I get home...

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #229 on: January 24, 2007, 09:58:58 am »
Through The Veil Of Time

Chapter 29. Another Unfamiliar Truck

http://lazylfarm.livejournal.com/28536.html

for fanfic readers:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3023375/29/

Am I spoiling you guys with too frequent updates? All I ask is for comments and feedback. Your support means so much to me! I'll let you in on a little secret...I love this chapter...and I wrote it! LOL

Leslie
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I have to say that this was a wonderful chapter. It brought back a lot of memories from Brokeback. I especially liked the part when Jack was trying to recreate the position he was in when he met Ennis! It was very good Leslie. Thanks!
Good judgement comes from experience. Experience comes from bad judgement. -Mark Twain.