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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #240 on: January 28, 2007, 11:02:06 am »
Hey Leslie, I just wanted to let you know I've been back in your Lazy L world for a while now. I started reading at chapter 15 (or so) and was - again - hooked with it. Thank you for this story  :-*.

Ah, Chrissi, great to know you are back in the reader's club! I really appreciate your support...thanks for coming along on this ride with Jack, Ennis, me, and the rest of the family.

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #241 on: January 28, 2007, 11:02:36 am »
I'll second what C* and Marie said.  :)

I really liked this chapter, but you already knew that  ;).


*sends a prayer of thanks to your muse*

My muse thanks you, Fabienne!

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #242 on: January 28, 2007, 11:03:37 am »


Beautiful chapter, Leslie.  As always.  Thank you!


C*


Thank you...I really appreciate your support and comments. They mean a great deal to me!

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #243 on: January 29, 2007, 09:45:59 am »
I was a little slow on getting this posted. For those who prefer to read on fanfiction.net, here is the link to Chapter 30:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3023375/30/

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #244 on: January 29, 2007, 10:00:22 am »
Great chapter Leslie.

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #245 on: January 29, 2007, 10:19:42 am »
Great chapter Leslie.

Thanks, Scott!

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #246 on: January 29, 2007, 11:27:33 pm »
loved this chapter Leslie !!  So, Jack wins the most "popular". 
But of course !!!!!  I can hear him now !!!

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #247 on: January 29, 2007, 11:39:23 pm »
i think this was one of my favorite chapters.  well worth the wait Leslie! Thanks

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #248 on: January 30, 2007, 09:30:30 am »
Leslie,

So, everyone wins something.  Reminds me of our cherry cake bake off!

Also,  a noticeable shift in the way Ennis and KE are relating to each other. 

Very nice chapter.

Paul

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Re: Through the Veil of Time
« Reply #249 on: January 31, 2007, 01:36:38 pm »
Yes, Leslie, your Jack has indeed been branded with a very special tatoo!

From Chapter 1:

Over time, the harsh memories of that night had faded and Jack could look back and remember it as a happy time. In fact, the tattoo that Jack sported on his upper right arm was a direct remembrance from that day: a stylized brand for the “Circle E Ranch,” which was something Ennis had said to him—“I’m brandin’ ya, cowboy”—during their 24 hours of non-stop lovemaking. (That would be May 17th, “Screw Yer Brains Out Day,” on Ennis’s calendar.)

The tattoo had come about because Jack had said, also during that same summer of 1976, that he wanted one with Ennis’s name. Ennis had thought he was joking but Jack had been completely serious. He pictured it as a lasso, writing Ennis’s name in script. He had even sketched a few designs. But when push came to shove, Ennis had asked him not to use his name. “It’s just too personal, Jack,” he said. “I know folks know we’re together but what if we were somewhere like…I dunno…a hotel with a pool or somewhere, with strangers…I’d be embarrassed.” The compromise had been the Circle E which, in the end, Jack was happier with. It was designed by Ennis’s daughter Jenny—their daughter, now, in both their minds—who was an artist living in Massachusetts. The design was striking and unusual and anyone who saw it commented on its beauty.

Jack absent-mindedly rubbed the spot where the tattoo was and Ennis noticed. “Circle E, I’m brandin’ ya, cowboy,” he said with smile, as they sat down at the dining room table.


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