My heart just sped up...
Jack smiled up at Ennis. “Well, thanks, babe. Remember the first time?”
“Up on Brokeback? Sure, I’ll never forget.”
“I walked into that tent and you were sittin’ there naked…you looked so young.”
“We were young…just two kids, forced ta grow up fast.”
Jack brushed his hand along Ennis’s jaw, letting it slide down onto his shoulder. “I had wanted ta blow ya for days, and I was too fuckin’ scared ta ask…and then, ya told me with yer eyes…”
“Our eyes did a lot of the talkin’ in the old days…”~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Leslie!!!
Okay, either I'm totally crazy, or "your boys" just did a mini flashback to "my boys." hehehe So, if I am crazy, just ignore me and read on to the next comment from the next reader. lol But if I'm not crazy, let me tell what you just did!
For just a moment, reading your story, I got to have something I'll never be able to write. Just for a moment, I got to see my J & E older and together and happy, because it felt so right that the two stories were tied together.
So you gave me something I'll never be able to write myself.
I got a glimpse of the happy ending.
That probably makes no sense at all. lol
But I feel like you just connected our two stories.
( ~~~ I wish I could do what you do ~~~~ I wish I could write an AU and give them what they deserve )
But you did it for me. Thank you!
Love ya, sweetie!
C*
