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"Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« on: July 02, 2006, 05:43:10 pm »
Title: Falling in Lust
Rating: PG to NC-17
Pairing: Heath/Jake, Heath/Michelle
Disclaimer: These stories are fantasies, any resemblance to the actual lives or persons is purely accidental and should not be taken as fact.
Summary: The Making of Brokeback Mountain does not leave its makers untouched.


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This is Real Person Slash, with a twist (you might say), my imagining of what Heath went through in "becoming" Ennis through the filming of the love scenes of Brokeback Mountain, as I imagine they might have occurred.

This page gets updated regularly, so refresh or keep a link if you would like to stay current.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #1 on: July 03, 2006, 01:20:17 pm »
I just HATE slash about real people...er, I love it. GO 'WAY!

Always suspected JG was a method actor...Funny, just like Brando--another method actor, Jake never takes his pants off (yes he does too). So how come Brokeback Mountain is so muich sexier than "Last Tango in Paris"?

BOY, is this FUN!
« Last Edit: July 07, 2006, 02:52:32 am by julie01 »
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2006, 12:33:14 pm »
Just a note to make sure you are aware that the drabbles are being updated regularly, if you are following them, check back once a day or so because I expect to continue to update them once each day.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #3 on: July 12, 2006, 07:44:23 am »
I hope you get back on the homosexual track before long Louise!   :P

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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #4 on: July 15, 2006, 03:58:37 pm »
New Updates have been posted.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #5 on: July 16, 2006, 04:13:14 pm »
'nuff of that--nastyness! Nasty posts shoulkd have a short shelf-life...

Hope there will be more, of whatever kind.
« Last Edit: July 17, 2006, 01:24:08 pm by julie01 »
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #6 on: July 21, 2006, 12:15:02 am »
"Then lovemaking might prove to be a challenge," he said, turning his eyes asway

I've MEMORIZED the verschlungener line! (that ain't German; it's Mad Magazine). Oh, and I'm only julie....

SZorry to be a pest, he, he...
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #7 on: July 21, 2006, 03:50:08 am »
More updates will be forthcoming.  I just had to er, do my job this week...
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #8 on: July 24, 2006, 03:55:37 am »
*bump*

The drabbles have been updated with  "32. What Ennis Wants" and 33: Playing the Flute"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #9 on: July 27, 2006, 04:38:18 pm »
*bumped* for updates

Update to "Falling in Lust:  250 Word RPS Drabbles"

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/378093.html  "34:  Saying Goodbye 35:  Grief"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #10 on: July 27, 2006, 05:24:06 pm »
He'll be back?
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #11 on: July 28, 2006, 12:48:50 pm »
yes
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #12 on: August 03, 2006, 11:28:17 pm »
When?
 ;)
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #13 on: August 04, 2006, 02:03:13 pm »
uh uh uh... I guess I can write some more of those ... since people want them....

voila.
PART II:

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/470268.html#cutid1

« Last Edit: August 04, 2006, 02:46:49 pm by louisev »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #14 on: August 08, 2006, 05:11:12 pm »
If you warch the reunion kiss in slo-mo (it's all I have; my Toshiba won't do slo-mo), each has his moments, but Heath is never off. Heath bounds down the stairs, never hesitating; Jack seems to be timing his approach so he'll meet heath at the right place.  Heath starts it by kissing JaKe on the neck, in the hug part, and then they both start looking at each other's mouths. Then Ennis (seem to be going back and forth here), starts looking ariound, and then he pushes Jack a long, long way against the wall. At first Jack is smiling, like  a kid (whee! We're goin '  for a ride!) and then the smile fades, and by ther time he's against the wall, his mouth is slightly open. But I think the smile is a little silly. But Heath kisses Jack just like he kisses the grirl in Casanova, except harder: his mouth is open a mile. Jack's eyes are great when the clinch breaks, but his mouth puckers too much before hiis part of the kiss. Jack's best is when he's trying to get at Ennis's mouth after Ennis has broken it; doesn't understand about the surveillance cameras. Ennis has to pry Jack's arm loose from around his head...

End of report. I never once thought they were doing anythng but acting, watching them both in slo-mo. But Heath was doing a slightly better job, except at the end, when they're both great.
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #15 on: August 14, 2006, 05:06:02 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #16 on: September 02, 2006, 01:54:23 am »
Eagerly awaiting the next bits...

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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #17 on: September 02, 2006, 02:04:32 am »
Me too--wrote a double haiku about your humor reminding me of Jack and Ennis having sex by the fire at night in the short story--gonna check it with Sid melucci, to see if he thinks you'd get OFFENDED...you DO, ya know.

I don't think I acrtuakllly wrote anything; anyway, Sid said no, so I threw it away--if any.
« Last Edit: September 19, 2006, 07:54:38 pm by twistedude »
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #18 on: September 02, 2006, 05:10:50 pm »
oh no, you guys are after me to do more drabbles... eeek! I'll see what I can do tonight.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #19 on: September 02, 2006, 05:59:05 pm »
Bumped for updates! at last

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/470268.html

5. Homecoming
6.  The Ennis Problem

Part I is here:  http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/378093.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #20 on: September 02, 2006, 07:00:41 pm »
Bumped for updates! at last

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/470268.html

5. Homecoming
6.  The Ennis Problem

Part I is here:  http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/378093.html
SO worth the loooong wait Louise (I was tempted to call you what Leslie mentioned in chat just now!! *grin* LOL! LOL!)
Pleeease don't wait too long with the next updates!!

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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #21 on: September 02, 2006, 07:10:48 pm »
between you and Helen and Julie I am going to be whipped into RPS and comic parody submission.

I wish I got this kind of following and devotion for my REAL fic!

Helen I think passed out laughing about "Wild Indian boys with long black hair."
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #22 on: September 17, 2006, 04:15:20 pm »
Bumped for updates!

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/470268.html


7.  Out of Love
8.  Madness
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #23 on: November 30, 2006, 07:51:11 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #24 on: December 01, 2006, 02:59:27 am »
Bumped for updates:

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/470268.html

with Parts 9 and 10.

Part I is here: http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/378093.html


Well, that was certainly worth waiting for (although it was a long wait  ;D)

thank you for updating louise!
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #26 on: December 01, 2006, 09:54:58 am »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #27 on: December 01, 2006, 02:39:42 pm »
Ohyeah...twistedude, that is...

It's louisev's story, and it shouod go the way SHE wants i to go, not the way WE do. Not that I think louisev could be forced into anyhing. WE made her continue it, though!

Love all this insanty; hope it doesn' end in a nuthouse, in one of which I haven' been since '93. but I imagine they're still as awful and useless as they used to be...in '66, youwalked in and left 40 years later in a pine box in some of them.  The more intense ones were..acually rather fun...

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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #28 on: December 02, 2006, 04:26:56 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #29 on: January 27, 2007, 11:11:37 am »
bump

*inserts a pleading cowboy smiley*  :)
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #30 on: January 27, 2007, 01:58:36 pm »
bump

*inserts a pleading cowboy smiley*  :)

Good thinking, Fabienne!

*pleads and begs along with Fabienne*

I've enjoyed this RPS series so much, Louise  :)

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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #31 on: January 27, 2007, 03:35:47 pm »
uh oh!

somebody wants this one instead of the two I'm working on!  Don't you like my naughty story, June?
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #32 on: January 22, 2008, 07:01:05 pm »
 
Out of respect for the dead, I have deleted these drabbles.  I believe that considering the troubled life that we have just seen pass before us, it is no longer appropriate for this story, which was merely a speculation on the actor's career and personal life, to be published anywhere.

Rest in peace, Heath.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”