Author Topic: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles  (Read 11782 times)

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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #10 on: July 27, 2006, 05:24:06 pm »
He'll be back?
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #11 on: July 28, 2006, 12:48:50 pm »
yes
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #12 on: August 03, 2006, 11:28:17 pm »
When?
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #13 on: August 04, 2006, 02:03:13 pm »
uh uh uh... I guess I can write some more of those ... since people want them....

voila.
PART II:

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/470268.html#cutid1

« Last Edit: August 04, 2006, 02:46:49 pm by louisev »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #14 on: August 08, 2006, 05:11:12 pm »
If you warch the reunion kiss in slo-mo (it's all I have; my Toshiba won't do slo-mo), each has his moments, but Heath is never off. Heath bounds down the stairs, never hesitating; Jack seems to be timing his approach so he'll meet heath at the right place.  Heath starts it by kissing JaKe on the neck, in the hug part, and then they both start looking at each other's mouths. Then Ennis (seem to be going back and forth here), starts looking ariound, and then he pushes Jack a long, long way against the wall. At first Jack is smiling, like  a kid (whee! We're goin '  for a ride!) and then the smile fades, and by ther time he's against the wall, his mouth is slightly open. But I think the smile is a little silly. But Heath kisses Jack just like he kisses the grirl in Casanova, except harder: his mouth is open a mile. Jack's eyes are great when the clinch breaks, but his mouth puckers too much before hiis part of the kiss. Jack's best is when he's trying to get at Ennis's mouth after Ennis has broken it; doesn't understand about the surveillance cameras. Ennis has to pry Jack's arm loose from around his head...

End of report. I never once thought they were doing anythng but acting, watching them both in slo-mo. But Heath was doing a slightly better job, except at the end, when they're both great.
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #15 on: August 14, 2006, 05:06:02 pm »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #16 on: September 02, 2006, 01:54:23 am »
Eagerly awaiting the next bits...

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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #17 on: September 02, 2006, 02:04:32 am »
Me too--wrote a double haiku about your humor reminding me of Jack and Ennis having sex by the fire at night in the short story--gonna check it with Sid melucci, to see if he thinks you'd get OFFENDED...you DO, ya know.

I don't think I acrtuakllly wrote anything; anyway, Sid said no, so I threw it away--if any.
« Last Edit: September 19, 2006, 07:54:38 pm by twistedude »
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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #18 on: September 02, 2006, 05:10:50 pm »
oh no, you guys are after me to do more drabbles... eeek! I'll see what I can do tonight.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: "Falling in Lust" 250 Word RPS Drabbles
« Reply #19 on: September 02, 2006, 05:59:05 pm »
Bumped for updates! at last

http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/470268.html

5. Homecoming
6.  The Ennis Problem

Part I is here:  http://community.livejournal.com/brokebackslash/378093.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”